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Hello, I'm Colt. Nice little poem you have there. Pros: +Good format, each stanza is the same amount of lines. +Great use of alliteration and repetition. +It's short and sweet, ...

Hello June! -don'tletthemonkeeskillmeI'mreviewingthis- When you told me you had another part of this, I was so excited to read it! I nearly died when I seen that you posted it. ...

Hello June! Yes I found your work with my secret powers I am hiding from you. Haha. I love the "I feel important" part. Very relatable! Thanks you two, for ...

Hello! I'm Colt! This was a nice, short, sweet poem. There are two ways you could go to improving it. The first way is changing a few words and keeping ...

Hello! Interesting choice for a fanfic...Halo! Like lukas8u said, tone it down please. Not much really is that dramatic. Not much grammar errors, and lots of repetition. Also, the paragraphs ...

Wow! Hello! I'm Colt. Your poem was tragically great! I don't know if it is free verse or not, but the format is weird and distracting. There was alliteration and ...

Hello Anna! I'm Colt! Obviously I will review your poem. I love the strong use of stylistic devices, but there could be more metaphors, similes, and personification. A simile is ...

Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card was really amazing. It was on our Battle of the Books list this year, so I read the series. I have read Ender's Game ...

Oh my gosh :o I loved it! It was great! It flowed tremendously well, and it rhymed! [s]Poems here lost their rhyming[/s] No poems here anymore do not rhyme much ...

Hello, I'm Colt, and I must say, sweet poem! Welcome to YWS! As I said in your other thread, members must keep a two review to one critique ratio. I ...

Like mhmmcolleenx0 said, I don't really look in here, but since I was lurking about, I seen this and decided to read it. I'm glad I did. :P Very interesting; ...

Wow...great job! I don't really care for Poe *don't kill me* but this was brilliant. It seems more like a story than a poem though. I also think some things ...

Hello, my name is Colt. Welcome to YWS! I see you are new, so you probably don't know the rules yet. We have a strict rule stating that for every ...

Hello, I'm Colt and I will be critiquing this piece today. Welcome to YWS! I hope you have had a grand time so far! How do you like it? If ...

Hello! I'm Colt :P Welcome to YWS! It's nice to meet you. If you need help around here, feel free to private message (PM) me. I see you are new ...