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charmyvora

  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Teardrops On My Guitar

    you know what i so fall into a similar situation :/ i mean i could actually understand each and every word of it .. it brought tears in my eyes ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Victim

    wow! this is a amazzing poem.. filled with the truth I really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you managed to create a great rhythm, and while it's obvious you ...

    Nov 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Satire Re: The Generation

    sad truth .. it is the reality yu put down in the words of a poem.. really loved it.. we are the future generations we actually don't know what is ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: You Have Killed Yourselves And Ourselves.

    i really loved the poem .. in fact this is the reality in today's world.. no one cares for anyone and the earth is filled with murders happening and people ...

    Sep 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suicide

    i liked the poem the way you wrote it.. it is really touching and i know i should not interfere in your life but i just wanted to tell suicide ...

    Sep 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: My Worst Week

    Sep 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Indian South African girl

    hey charmy here to review , i really loved your poem it was wonderful and perfect in today's partial world.. from young we are said that girls's and boys are ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Dear you!

    hey charmy here to review you , your poem is simply amazing when i read the title i had a first impression that the poem will be some kind of ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Volume 2

    its a wonderful poem written in a story form , yu showed daisy as a really innocent character and the way yu explained the thunder was simply amazing , i ...

    Sep 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: The River Echoed

    i really liked this poem .. its has a deeper meaning , nd just a few mistakes here nd der but ur perfect in poems nyway :D keep it up.. ...

    Sep 6, 2013


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