chancesnchanges

Hi! there GreenTulip :) .. Whoa, it felt creepy and ominous but, let's face it, we can end up shattered and insane if we let our addiction overpower us. I ...

Hi! there CesareBorgia :) .. You've created an action packed chapter that sets the foundation of your story; leaving us with ideas and guesses on how will it revolve. Thus, ...

Hi! there GriffinClaw :) .. On goes life reiterates the beauty of being alone because it allows us to appreciate what we have. Our personal time, as they call it, ...

Hi! there megsug :) .. On the previous chapters, I found out that Lekan was on trial, Qui'in was frequently making her way inside the palace and she happens to ...

Hi! there GreenLight24 :) .. Whoa... it felt as if the words and you are one-- you collaborated flawlessly. The emotions, scenes and characters are well described that it made ...

Hi! there GrayLady :) .. There is much pain in your piece like in someways, she's not allowed to be happy to express herself better. She carries a load of ...

Hi! there LightWolf777 :) .. I admire the honesty that beams through your essay. Especially, the message that you're trying to convey. And at some point, it made me think... ...

stopped. Hi! Sassykat :) I like how you've constructed this poem, leaving it open-ended. For some reason, it may show how we differ in handling pain. Depending on it's degree, ...

Hi! there Rarity :) .. Impressive, that's the word that popped in my mind after reading your piece. It run smoothly and, by the way, nice choice of words. I, ...

Hi! MysteryMe :) .. It is never a crime to show your weak side— to cry when your breaking apart, to ask help when you're in despair and to open ...

Hi! there jizzlackson :) .. I agree to what Iggy have said. I know that it takes a lot of courage but be brave enough to confess your feelings towards ...

Hi! there alexiss =^) .. For me this a story about best friends. Where, at times, one of them falls for their friend which can lead to ~ just friends ...

Hi! Morticiansdaughter19, "Against all odds" is the theme I had acquired in your poem. Because despite of all the pain and despair that tries to set you apart. It can't ...

Hi! Dragofriend1234.. As a whole it is interesting. "Life is a journey." It is something that all of us can relate to. Which might have started with a question. That ...

Hi! robertsoad.. I like the flow, message and the way this poem is constructed. Because this time others just exist without living their life. In someway passive or somewhat they ...