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This is so sad. And you are right, Stupid Marissa. That little... This was a very interesting piece and I loved how you can just imagine what she's going to ...

Oh my this was great! First off I loved every second of this! I loved how you described everything so perfectly. The part where you describe how you are a ...

This was very meaningful! One question though, do you believe in Unicorns in real life? Ok next thing. I loved the idea that when people die they turn into honorary ...

Hello Richelle! Cgirl here for a review!!! First off you may want to read over your work and make sure it runs through smoothly. That's key in writing. Also I ...

Hello, Cgirl here for a review on your awesome story! FIrst off, I love anything that is in journal form or a diary kind of thing. It catches my interest. ...

I'm tearing up now. I shouldn't have read this, I should've listened to the warning. But I was like, "Ooh violence, lets read". First off, even though it was a ...

Got your PM! This is amazing! I really love it even more now. Anything that has to do with some kind of zombie apocalypse is always good. 1. "abandoned in ...

I just read a complete amount of randomness. Thank you for that. I love, love, love this! It is so funny and random! What better than a story about a ...

I really liked the idea of this!! First off, there are no mistakes that I have found. Good job on that! Questions: What's the difference between a Turned and an ...

I believe you! This was a really funny story and I loved it! In the beginning when you described the clouds and the grass it made me believe I was ...

This is a very beautiful piece of work. It is very heartbreaking. First off, "I wish my mom was still around". What does that have to do with everything else. ...

Hello! First off I'll to say that this amazing and definitely is drawing me in. I love how you start it off with a story that turns out to be ...

This is so freaking cool! :) 1. This is probably nitpicky but, "writing about.Cogs collapsed", there is supposed to be a space after the period, you kind of forgot that. ...

Is this the whole thing? I thought this was a little too short for my attention. 1. "The attractive barnacle, although passing him in looks had no super powers once ...

Hi SecreteJournalist! I'm Cgirl here for a review on this awesome intro! 1. "We only have five little one."