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I found this story to be very touching. I do have advice on how to edit your story though. Please take it into consideration. "Good morning, Anna." "You're my doctor, ...

This poem is completely intense. I can feel everything that's going on right now. It's as if I'm actually there. I feel as if I'm the one who's dying because ...

This sounds like a good story as a start. I just have a few things to say when it comes to editing and stuff like that. Here: "Well, aren't you ...

This sounds like a good beginning to a story. I like the description that you have even though more of it wouldn't hurt, especially in the beginning of the chapter ...

This story was heartbreaking as I read it. Poor Adrianna. I almost cried when I read this. Still, there are things that you can fix. "16th" is "sixteenth." I feel ...

I feel as if this poem describes my life so well at the moment. Even thought I'm a graduate, I feel as if things were left unsaid after leaving school ...

I really like the bubble of water metaphor. As the poem goes on, it makes the reader think that life is important, and one should extend his horizons instead of ...

I love your metaphors in this poem. Romantic chills came over me as I was reading each stanza of this poem. One thing irks me about this though. I don't ...

I got the chills as I was reading this. As far as I'm concerned, this looks like a promising story that's coming. There are just some parts that you could ...

When you mentioned Turkish Delight, my stomach started to growl. It's about lunchtime where I am, LOL. Sorry, completely off topic. The description of the sky in this poem is ...

I used to be a part of the Folio Club at my school. The Folio was the literary magazine, and we put it a lot of poetry, short stories, and ...

Every time I read this poem, I get a good laugh. There is good rhythm when it comes to this poem, but there’s one line that you should consider. "never ...

I feel in love with this poem right away. Not only is the rhyming perfect, I can actually feel the beat and flow along with the poem. In all honesty, ...

Though this poem is a short one, I have to admit that I was locked onto it until the very end when it finished. The description of the swimmer in ...

You created a very cute short story here. I just have a few things that you can fix to make it better. Edits found here: "Alright, young octoplings, let's not ...