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Re: Enslaved
Hi anonymousx! Happy Review Day! Catcha01 here with a review. First off I liked how you stated and just interpreted love in this piece. "Enslaved. Again." That was how you ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Headaches and Heartaches
Hi Lylas! Happy Review Day! Catcha01 here with a review. First off this poem was short, but it truly hit home. I've never been in a relationship, but I see ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Love Lost Life Regained
Hi RainbowPowerPonies! Happy Review Day! It's Catcha01, and I'm here to review your poem. Okay so this a very interesting poem. One that I don't think I have ever come ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: My Monster
Hi Vivian! Catcha01 here with a review. I absolutely love this poem!!! This made me look at monsters in a totally different light. I was reading it and was like ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Song of the lost
HI fallenoutofgrace, Catcha01 here and I'm here to review your poem. So this is a very nice poem. I see that the poem is very relatable and is understood easily. ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: If I Could Go Back
Hey Superminder, Catcha01 here. Very nice poem you have here. Like NoonBlueApple said your poem is repetitive. Now repetitiveness is not always a bad thing, but inconsistency can be. For ...
Oct 25, 2014 -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here
Hi Roundsquare, it's Catcha01 and I'm here to review. Good job Roundsquare. It was a great chapter and I enjoyed reading it. It was very in depth and described very ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: I wonder
OMG OMG OMG I LOVED THIS POEM!! (Even though I helped and read it already) I cried, this was just so beautiful. The poem and the structure is just so ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Sidney's Children Meets Youtube~ Prologue (Part 1)
Hi Pinkiegirl13, I like the plot, it has a lot of potential to grow into a very interesting novel. The character is nice and relatable in a way trying to ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: My Life
Hello Aeri, As wtppowers said "A POEM THAT RHYMES!" Now then, this is a very nice concept for a poem. To have the ability to express feelings so fluently through ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Rocks and stones
Hi Rosetta, this is a rather interesting concept for a poem. It seems that you're leading up to the dangers of rock and stones with their good and useful qualities. ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: The Blood of the Martyrs- Chapter 2: The Encounter
Hello TheWanderingWizard, I am here with a review. First off good story and I can see the potential in this story. the storyline would be wonderful to read and the ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 2: Birthday Party (Part 1)
Hello, That was wonderful to read and now I'm jittery waiting for part 2. (I have a problem). It doesn't suck, the topic I will admit has some cliche aspects, ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: Life of Stephanie Pritchard~Chapter 1: 8th Grade Prom
Hello Pinkiegirl13, Catcha01 here with a review. First off I like this story you took a cliche topic and personalized it so Hats off to you. I feel that I ...
May 29, 2014 -
Re: Summer With The Supernatural
Hello LamiaCor, Catcha01 here with a review. First off welcome to YWS. I liked this prologue and I see that if you continue with it, it has great potential. The ...
May 26, 2014