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casey_kent

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: As if I was in Love 1 (edited)

    Although it seems cliche and all, I actually like it. Though I found a few errors but you can easily fix that. It's nice. Good job. ~Casey

    Nov 2, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You are me - You are God.

    One word I can say, beautiful. Are you a Christian? If you are all I can say to you is, God bless you. ~Casey

    Aug 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Ode to My Fabulous Mother

    I really liked this. I can see the passion that you have in writing this ode. It kinda hits in the chest. That's what I want to see in literature. ...

    Aug 4, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Stay

    Hey there sweetie!! OMG, I loved this story. It's short but very romantic! Another good one! And please, change the envelop to envelope.. That's all the critique I can give. ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Lost Myself

    I liked this poem. Although the life of this poem is kinda weak. It seems that there is something lacking but I do not know what it is. I love ...

    Jun 12, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Thirteen Kisses

    This is really good! I loved it! Although the best-friends-turning-into-lovers part is a bit of cliche. But I liked the story though!

    Jun 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chasing The Sun (Chapter 1)

    Hey wuvies.. Okay this was a nice story. Very uhm romantic. I like the plot and the story line! Great job! Another great piece! Keep it up, wuvies! ~Cas-wuvs

    May 31, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Home

    This poem is really nice. Especially the theme. It's worth crying. But it's a bit too choppy, you gotta put the words in the proper places so that it would ...

    May 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life

    Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I love this poem.. I love the contradictions that you put in the poem.. This poem is amazing. Lovely. Great job! Keep writing! ~Casey

    May 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: For you were and will always be

    Awwww. I loved it. I'm sure your friend will love this. And she/he would cry. It's magical. Great job, great poem. Keep writing! Peace man, Casey the AWESOME

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Up

    I liked it. It was short but cute. I have nothing more to say because the poem is satisfying. I'm satisfied with it! Good job, good poem. Keep writing! Peace ...

    Apr 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Post-It Note

    I love it. It was creative and cute. I never really thought about what's in here. I love Post-it notes. I think they're really cool. Anyway, good job, great poem. ...

    Apr 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I hate your love

    I liked this. Very strong. Keep writing!

    Apr 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Possession

    I liked this poem. Though it's a little scary.I dont want to to happen to me. Anyway, keep writing! ~Casey the AWESOME

    Apr 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: These Doldrums

    I liked this. This reminded me of... *cries* Nooo, I thought about it again. I told myself not to. Okay, this poem is very strong and I like it's concept. ...

    Apr 26, 2008


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