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  • Coppery-Haired Boy (early work)

    This is an early piece of work I did, so it's kind of. . .blah, but here goes. The coppery-haired boy gazed up at the professor, his eyes alight with ...

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  • Dear Mom

    Dear Mom, I can’t come home, Not yet, And I know you’re angry at me For just taking off Like I did, But I swear, Mom, I’m working things out, ...

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  • Tired Feet

    Tired Feet Tired feet, got to rest, Sitting still, eyes closed, Letting memories wash over me. Emotions, dim with time, Skitter across an endless pond That seems to be my ...

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  • Refugees 1

    This is written in an interesting format. Rather than chapters, I have written this in little pieces, each from the perspective of a defferent character. Any sort of critiques are ...

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  • Refugees 1

    his is written in an interesting format. Rather than chapters, I have written this in little pieces, each from the perspective of a defferent character. Any sort of critiques are ...

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  • Global Warming

    In the year 2006, Al Gore came out with a film called An Inconvenient Truth. I myself am a big fan of horror movies, but this one in particular left ...

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  • Prologue

    The drumbeats pounded a strange, otherworldly rhythm as the playrs swooped in and faced eachother squarely. The old man wore a knowing smile, the young mn a cruel grimace and ...

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  • Clearwater

    CHAPTER ONE A Victim of Greed It happened slowly, so slowly that not even the wisest of the gods noticed. Not even the wisest noticed how jealous little Ixchel became. ...

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  • Clearwater, Chapter 1 part 2

    Forgotten Child Ronan Rothschild, like almost every other child in Clearwater, had a summer job at a laboratory, helping some crazy scientist by carrying and cleaning and looking useful. Ronan ...

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  • Clearwater Part 3

    Just thought I'd save you some trouble. If you've never read Clearwater before, please read the first part of it, which starts at the beginning of Chapter one. It's down ...

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  • Clearwater 4

    The Beginning A sky filled with dragons. An earth where time stood still. Ronan tried to make sense of it, but he could not. Questions rocketed through his brain like ...

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  • Identity

    CHAPTER ONE False Starts Mama and I, we understand sarcasm. Not just the obvious kind, but the subtle sarcasm too, the kind most people miss. Sarcasm lies everywhere, occasionally disguised ...

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  • Nova Terre

    PROLOGUE Day Twelve Day TwelveCalm waters, gray clouds, repairs to bowsprit, Rolo paused, the pen dripping ink onto the page. Father was supposed to do the ship’s log, not him. ...

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  • Saphyri (Nova Terre, with a better name)

    I know you're not supposed to forward fiction, but this is continued from a post called Nova Terre. It isn't necessary to have read the prologue, but it will help ...

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  • Student of the Night

    Softly, wanderer, do not disturb this night, for in this perfect stillness lies the magic you seek. Sit by my fire and listen to the whisper of the grasses as ...

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  • Maggie's Ghosts

    Chapter One Ellen Traum watched the woman walk into her office, carefully taking stock. She was in her mid- twenties, probably, and she wore baggy jeans and a man’s button-down ...

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  • Maggie's Ghosts

    Maggie stopped at a rest stop fifty miles out of the city and pulled two hundred dollars out of her bank account, leaving only three hundred and thirty dollars remaining. ...

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  • Kelly Jo's Castle

    Chapter One Kelly Jo’s Castle Mama leaned against the sink, drawing the back of her hand across her lined forehead. Daddy was staring into a wine glass full of Bob’s ...

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  • Questions

    Questions “What about stars? What are stars like?” Casey shoved him playfully. “You asked me that already. Gimme a new one.” Brian shrugged and lay back against the hardwood floor. ...

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  • The Last Questions

    "What about stars? What are stars like?" Casey shoved him playfully. "I think you asked me that one already. Gimme a new one." Brian shrugged and lay back against the ...

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  • Stop

    Stop. Just stop. You're fiddling. Tapping your toe glancing around, picking your fingernails. Stop. Can you do it? Are you scared of the stillness? Yes, I thought so. Let me ...

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  • The Blood of the Pomegranate

    I stood in the face of danger. I, Persephone, who was the bringing forth of life in spring, I who stood among the powerful and the strong, I looked Death ...

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  • A Conversation over Muffins

    I know you're not supposed to give an introduction, but I feel that this piece needs one. I hope I don't offend anybody. I want to assure you that the ...

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  • Toxic knows all

    He was Alexander. Never Alex, never Xander, but Alexander. If you didn’t want to call him Alexander, he was Toxic. No one new why. He was a senior, which was ...

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  • The Alphabet

    So recently I got interested in the alphabet and what it means. If you go back to Greece, each letter had a meaning, and a bunch of other cultures, ancestors ...

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  • The Alliance

    Saturday, June 21, 2008 Rae The old barn, creepy enough even in broad daylight, seemed crawling with mystery in the glow of a flickering candle. The barn stuck out like ...

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  • Nevermore

    Morning, Penny decides, is no time to concentrate on walking attractively. Anyone who might raise an eyebrow over an eight o’clock waddle clearly doesn’t need to be listened to in ...

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  • Nevermore-part 2

    Lorraine leans against the wall in the girls’ dressing room, which doubles as a greenroom and is therefore double the disaster. “Shit,” she says. “I can’t believe our dress rehearsal’s ...

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  • Chapter One--A Young Ruler's Guide to Etiquette

    Sickness had a smell. It was thick like honey, dusty like a summer without rain and acidic like the heavy stench of vinegar. Incense burned in each of the four ...

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  • Fifteen

    1. PENNY She studies herself. Skin, legs, arms and hair bare their secrets tot he mirror. She sees her eyes; their black pits gleam with strength and compassion and something ...

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  • Fifteen 2

    *Please don't write titles in full caps* CHAPTER ONE 1. PENNY She studies herself. Skin, legs, arm and hair bare their secrets to the mirror. She is only fifteen. She ...

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  • Fifteen 3

    Chapter Two 1. ARIA It’s over. The day is over. Aria collapses into the softness of her white hospital sheets and closes her eyes. Within her, the Monster’s armies rip ...

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  • The Summer of the Beginning of Our Lives

    and and and the truck started with a rumble and it shook us in our sears - we exchanged smiles - and we were off! and it was the beginning ...

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  • The First Canto (tentative title)

    I tired of the world. It no longer interested me. The things that once consumed me seemed shallow, meaningless. I was lost on a one-way street, choking on the dust ...

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  • Don't you know?

    Don't you know,You funny little adolescent,That there's small deathAt the bottom of every beer?

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  • 12:04 Part one

    This is all I have of this story right now, and I take some time writing usually, but I plan to have more soon.Jan. 15, 201012:04 PMI squeezed the hot, ...

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  • Her Eulogy

    Imagine a little house on a quiet street in a quiet town. The house is comfortable like a thread-bare bathrobe, a fixture in a wildly changing world. Imagine a mother ...

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  • With you

    With you I want to walk the worldWith you;And hand in hand shall we traverse the world With footsteps made light by one another's joyAnd the moon made brighter by ...

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  • Darkly, a Solution

    Darkly, a solution:Run. Take nothing with you. Have yourself one of those all-American road trip, because soon you'll have... Responsibilities. So you burst out of there in a car older ...

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  • Psyche and Eros

    It went on, time did, and Eros became a man. He set one foot in front of the other and traveled the world, a smile creasing his face, a trail ...

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  • Only the Message Mattered

    Sorry it's a bit long. I've been playing around with style - let me know what you think. Change in person from third to first is intentional - let me ...

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  • Only the Message Mattered 2

    If this were that kind of book, the messenger would have run up to Meria and given her they envelope at his dying moment. Cue the overly dramatic, symphonic music. ...

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  • Only the Message Mattered 3

    yesterday I walked beyond the city limitsbeyond my body limits where the sky was blue and the trees were tickling that blue and birdssang,,,,,,,,,,,,,i was part of the sky, eh, ...

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  • What I am

    This is just a style I'm playing around with; i'd like to hear what people think works, doesn't work... be honest!Fly, hurdle, spree! Free!Can't catch me, I'm what the blind ...

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  • Ode to Aphrodite

    So this poem was written by Sappho, 2700 years ago, but I translated it from Ancient Greek for a school project. I know it's accurate to what the original says, ...

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  • Sparrow

    There was a little house on a quiet street in a quiet town. The house had its pros and cons, but it was always permanent, a fixture in a wildly ...

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  • The Man-Poet

    The Poet, more than any artist, has his work cut out for him. Firstly, there is nothing manly about rhyming lines, and it's a total hoax that girls find poets ...

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  • The Psychologist

    The psychologist in the ratty T-Shirt paced back and forth atop the New York Lottery building. He’d woken up there yesterday, stripped of his usual tweed suit and bifocals. His ...

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  • Aprather High

    This is the beginning of something I'm working on mostly for the practice writing subtext in my dialogue. For critiquers, that's what I'd most like to be critiqued on. Gracias!There ...

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We do have funerals for the living. They're called birthday parties.
— Jill Biden (fictitiously), Hope Never Dies