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Re: phantom limb
Hai :3 This is so complex!! Immediately, it pulled me in. Like, salt is so symbolic ~~ It’s about preservation, but also wounds, stinging, and pain. It’s almost like the ...
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Re: Starving Artist
Hai :3 This is such a good poem!! I love how you start with writing as a coping mechanism!! That feels so relatable!! The way you describe writing as a ...
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Re: i wish we could go to the stars instead of being defined by them
Hai :3 This is so beautiful, I’m obsessed!! The whole star-crossed lovers theme is like totally classic, but you’ve made it feel fresh and intimate in a way that really ...
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Re: mother's worry
Hai :3 This is such a good poem!! I love how you dive straight into the worry ~~ Like, it’s not just a feeling, it’s part of who you are. ...
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Re: Sally and Laughing Jack have an interesting conversation
Hai :3 This is so chilling but in the best way possible!! You’ve got this eerie, playful vibe nailed down so perfectly, and I can see the character grinning as ...
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Re: Misguided Realm of a Thousand Lies
Hai :3 This story has so much going on, and I am loving the worldbuilding here!! The whole setup with “The Great Deep,” Oathleim, and Arslic's council speech is so ...
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Re: the burden of reflecting
Hai :3 This is so old, but it caught my eye!! I figure I could give you my own interpretations in case you'd ever want to revise it. I have ...
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Re: four letters to four people i've learned to call a family
Hai :3 I'm not the audience for this, but I figure I'd be a good person to review since I have no bias >.< It's always great to read your ...
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Re: Perdita Beaumont-The mysteries of love
Hai :3 This is so captivating from the very beginning!! I love how you set up Perdita’s character as both innocent and longing for something more, which is already giving ...
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Re: THE QUEEN (Part 2)
Hai :3 This story is so intriguing!! I love how it's diving into this mysterious, magical world with the queen of snakes thing!! There’s so much to work with here, ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: Je t'aime (I love you) - 2
Hai :3 I'm back!! This part is juicy!! The prank war is totally escalating, but it’s turning against Janae in the most unexpected way. I didn't see that coming!! Hayden ...
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Re: Je t'aime. (I love you) - 1
Hai :3 This is so much fun!! I’m loving the dynamic between Janae and Hayden right away!! The drama, the pranks, the little sneaky tension building up are super entertaining. ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: Circus Blood
Hai :3 This is full of so much emotion and intensity!! It's like I could feel the pain dripping from every word!! Even from the beginning, it’s the perfect setup ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: New Alzheimer's Disease Drug Receives Full FDA Approval
Hai :3 This article is packed with interesting developments on Lecanemab!! It’s super fascinating how it's making waves, especially in Alzheimer’s research, which has been a bit stagnant in terms ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: glass houses
Maisie!! Hai :3 This poem totally captures the dissonance of everyday scenes, and I love it!! The social commentary here is spot on!! The automatic reactions, the forced laughter, and ...
Sep 28, 2024
