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Hai :3 This has such a bittersweet feel, which really adds to the whole reflection on time, love, and forgiveness!! The way you weave in both the quiet beauty and ...

Hai :3 This is so heavy and chilling in the best way possible!!! I’m floored by how you weave such a huge event like 9/11 with these personal moments of ...

Hai :3 This is so vivid and haunting!! I felt every bit of that tension in the air!! You totally nailed the atmosphere with the sweating fingers and the sun ...

Seoyoung!! Meowww your writing is always so good!! Hai :3 The imagery in this poem is so vivid and loaded with quiet, heavy emotion. I love how you start with ...

Hai :3 This is packed with so much raw emotion!! The repetition of "tear after tear" really makes the pain feel like this never-ending cycle, like you're trapped in it, ...

Hai :3 This poem feels like a quiet storm of emotion ~~ There’s such a delicate balance between loss, love, and regret that really pulls at you. You’ve captured the ...

Hai :3 Oh my gosh, this poem is incredible!! You’ve woven together such a profound narrative about womanhood, power, and the constant fight to reclaim space and identity in a ...

Hai :3 You really dive into such raw, intense emotions here, and the way you balance between anger and understanding is so captivating!! The structure mirrors the internal conflict and ...

Hai :3 This poem is so powerful and raw!! The way you’ve tackled the impact of words is super intense and relatable ~~ It really hits home how deeply language ...

Hai :3 This is so delicate and full of heart!! The way you capture memory and those tiny moments, like the mango trees and the black tea, is so intimate ...

Hai :3 This poem is so rich!! It’s such a tender way of talking about love and identity, especially with the diamond imagery and how we’re shaped by our experiences ...

The Cure reference ???!?? Anyways hai!! I'm still getting used to this whole reviewing thing!! Good stuff: I love the contrast between the nostalgia and the darker reality!! I think ...

Meowww mrowww meowww Hai Seoyoung :3 Good stuff: All of yr writing is always sososo descriptive it's crazy!! Everything comes from the heart and you can tell it's serious to ...