cammie

Thanks tgirly! Hey, you live in South Dakota? Cool! Is that near Colorado? That's where I live. But right now I'm in Florida visiting my grandparents and going to the ...

This as awesome! I really liked your story.

HI! I really like your story. I don't have much to say except I really liked the concept and it was well-developed. Bye!

Oh wait, one more thing. The title doesn't really fit. I thought something happened to the other person or object, and you just got that benefit givin to you. Unless ...

So sad! The rhyme was really good! So good that I didn't even notice it until halfway through! It flowed well. All I can say is... maybe add a line ...

LOVE IT! hahahah this was funny. and a perfect fit for the contest.... it could be a winner :-)

This is awesome! Wow, there is some close competition.... :-)

Awesome! Wow, this is going to be among the top winners I can already tell!

oh one more thing. the title is weird. capatilize it and take out the comma. unless of course you did that on purpose like e.e. cummings or something. but anyway ...

Hey everybody.. If you like this poem will you like it with the little "like" button at the top? :-)

thanks so much 'ScratchMan. i was kind of aiming for that. but maybe it didn't work because in the end you were supposed to be either sad or happy. i ...

Kat- Don't say that wasn't helpful! THank you so much, and I'm sorry about the grammar error about the their or there thing. Thanks for catching that! (And by the ...

ok, thanks for the reveiws! but if i shou;dn't arrange it that way, how should i?

sorry! nevermind i got it. you mean "imagined" would be a better word for "born". sorry about that! :-) ignore my last post. bye! -cammie

oh one more thing. in the beginnining "imagined" would be a better word for what? just clarify a little. thanks! bye -cammie