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wow this was so amazing i don't even know how to begin. it was so so so so so so so so so sad! i almost cried. it was amazingly ...

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! that's funny. this was really good. i think it's good how you didn't make it flow, but if you did it might have made us think it was more ...

Hi! i really liked this first of all. it has a strange steady beat. but i was wondering about some things while i was reading it. First, did you mean ...

wow! i really love this story. i've been trying to think of another creative idea for like... ever! i just can't come up with this kind of stuff. i love ...

There it stands, meandering,Across the emerald green,From the East, towards the west,On the tops of rolling jade,Hills that shine like diamonds in, The early morning feet beat the uneven ground,Like ...

Report this postDiary by SkyeDreamer on Thu Apr 28, 2011 6:25 pm Day 1I’m sorry I’m not good enough,But really, I thought I did try.I don’t know why you act ...

i really like this poem! is it intentional that you put some words together and left spaces between others? if it was, it worked well because it was always where ...

I like your poem! I think it was pretty and you didn't use too many cliche phrases. Also i especially liked the part about "dancing orbs of light." Over all ...

I take a deep breath and my first step A girl in the heart of a hurricane, Waiting, waiting for the blistering depth As my mind drifts ‘cross familiar plains, ...

This girl is Fire and I am Ice,She radiates warmth- and I cold to entice.She melts my heart- I freeze her soul,She likes the heat- and I the cold.A hypnotic ...

She's got cinnamon hair And icy blue eyes, a clever mind, But a cold, unused heart. If she has mind for kindness, She doesn't use it. But she's got her ...

She strode to the red armchair, listening to the thunderous applause roaring to greet her. Katie Benson was sitting in the chair opposite of her, her calm hands placed in ...

I made the star extra bright, Letting the glitter sparkle as though It could be seen from space. It wasn’t the best star, The corners curled and the paper crinkled; ...

The clicking of the clock ceases to start, As all time is frozen like solid water, The wind is still between each bare blowing, All that is moving, a silent ...

Cool! I like how you kept using the words "rain" and "tears". It created a feeling of sadness because the word choice was so limited. Sometimes when people are sad ...