burninhell

Hello, Just thought I'd do a short one for this chapter, as with all the other chapters, I loved it. It's great how you explained the dream hunters and nightmares, ...

Me again :) Just thought I'd have a little fandom on here, because though I didnt think it could get any better, you proved me completely wrong and made it ...

It gets better! Oh my gosh I love it so much! Literally everything about your entire storyline is perfect so far, you have me on edge wanting to know what's ...

Okay, this was beyond good, it was incredible! I'm about to go and read the next parts like right now. But thought I might as well give you a quick ...

Hello, Just thought I would let you know that I think that this is completely and utterly amazing, I'm about to go and read the other parts now :) I ...

Ah, Priceofwords. I both love you and hate you for this chapter. Though I am glad that Alice managed to get away from her home and mostly her mother, I ...

This was very good! I enjoyed the gripping plot like that you have managed to create and I look forward to reading more about what happens next. You made the ...

This is a very good piece of writing! I find myself desperately intrigued about suspect 009. And you have me wishing that there was more here to read so I ...

I completely loved this, the tension that you managed to mix in, along with the suspense left me clinging to your every word. All the way through I found myself ...

I read an article recently that explained prologues arent used often anymore. I think you've just shown that they should be! This had me gripped. I love the way you ...

This is a seriously good piece! It makes you wonder about this girl. What is she like? Why go through so much effort for the one flower? What's so important ...

A nice piece of writing. Really makes you think. You've really captured how hard it is to think of the one thing that you are more afraid of than all ...

I completely loved this! You were able to develop the scene really well at the start so that the reader was given a good understanding of the situation, and you ...

Normally I'm not a massive fan of poetry (I know, shun me) but I really enjoyed this! Every word you wrote was highly relateable. I love how you describe it ...

A really good story! I think that the ideas that are behind this are amazing, you had me hooked throughout. There were a couple of points where I was a ...