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Hey! So, I'm just going to stop by and give you a little review. I'm going to get my nitpicks out of the way first and then we can get ...

Hey, Just thought I'd stop by with a quick review. I'm going to start off with getting all the nitpicks out of the way, so here goes: complete his goal ...

Oh my god, this was amazing!!! I literally could not find a single thing to fault. Wow! I loved the twist at the end of this, I was definitely not ...

Hi! So this is a great chapter you have here! It was definitely an interesting start that raises quite a few questions to make me want to read on! Okay, ...

Hey Leek! A review as promised. :) Okay, so I'm going to get the grammatical errors I noticed out of the way first and then we can get to talking ...

Heya! Okay, this is just going to be quite a short review, because aside from a couple of tiny nitpicks I loved this! It's a super creative idea and I ...

Hey! So, I just thought I'd drop by to give this short story of yours a review. So I'm going to start off with saying whoa, that was super creative ...

WHY! Why oh why oh why.... You've hit me right in the feels. This ending.... Why.... It's so good, but so sad and wow. Not quite sure how to write ...

Hey, me again :) Have I mentioned how much I love this? Because I do. I also did forget to mention how much I like this little countdown you've got ...

Heya, Okay, so, I loved this! I already completely ship Ara and Rey. Your description in this piece is great! And I really really liked Ara's small display of humor ...

Hey Pricey So, as promised a review, it's not going to be very long because I don't really have anything constructive to say. Engulfed in my blood red arms Your ...

Hey! So, I'm just going to start off by saying that I loved this! The whole concept of the plot is really intriguing! I loved that your characters were all ...

Hey Oswin, Belated welcome to YWS! This seems like it's going to be a really great story! I love the idea of people being able to turn into animals, I ...

Hiya! Me again. And again, I loved this!!! I presume that the boy that they are both talking about is the child mentioned at the end of chapter 2? If ...

Hello! Okay, so just like the last chapter I loved this. The cliffhanger at the end... definitely wants me to read on :) This time around I couldn't find any ...