bunnie_i_am

I really like this peice, it's very realistic to Herminones charecter, but one thing that bothered me was this- “Accio rope!” I know you mentioned her studing a head, but ...

Hey, I really liked you poem, it had me from the start. There was only one part that seemed akward to me- Happily, I latched onto you,like an ignorant puppy, ...

Wow, that was really good! It was short, but stil good. But in the short part, not only did it make me laugh (it's a good thing), but it also ...

O my gosh! that was sooo sweet!!! I only saw one problem, “Nick?” I asked, turning to face him. “Yes?” He said softly, his words almost lost in the breeze. ...

That's really interesting =))((= please keep me updated!!! I disagree with Chinchilla, Bunny the best!!!! =)))(((= I deserve all those!! :piratedthread: :smt117 :smt064 :smt059 :smt060 :elephant: :thu

I love this poem!!!!!! =) Somy favorite part? Easy!!!! I walk in the shadows and yearn for the sun, for darkness end light, can never be won. That is so ...

I really like this, I'm not even lieing this time! Welll, everyone else already toke care of all the grammer mistakes so I get to do the fun things!!!!! I ...

Well, most people has already done the hard work, so I'm just going to say what I think! :D It was a very good work, and it's really indept (I ...

This is extremly good!!!!!!! I'm not even joking!!! (Not that I would in the first place, but you get my point) I really like this part Newcomer." The word was ...

Hey!! Well, I really like this. It's down to earth, and someting that could happen. It has a little poetic touch to it too. Well, I couldn't find much wrong ...

I saw a few gramar mistakes, but i'll leave those for others to point out! =) The one thing that really kinda bothered me was this... "Look there's no time ...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to no what happens!!!!!!!!!!! Urg, I hate school!!!!!!!!! Write MORE!!!! Now!!!!!!!!!! Haha jk. But still right more!!!! Do they become Vampres??? Wha

Awwww, that's so sad. =( Okay, overall it was really good. There was only one pert that confused me. It's as if you've taken to me, a gun. It toke ...

You finally put something new up! This is really quite sad once I saw what it's most likely about... Okay, now on to the editing... Today was the last day ...

This is really good, but sad to me, in a way. It remindes me of summer turning into fall, and I hate the cold! Is that what it's about? Well ...