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I like that this is so simple. I like that the meaning about this is so straight forward, and foreboding, like it shows what horrible thing the world has come ...

um thanks...I think

Thanks :)

Sorry bout that first line. It was all askew and just would not be fixed :P

Haahah thanks :)

Thank you :)

Thanks so much:) and I actually did try fixing those mistakes as well, but the editing isnt working fot me :P But thank you for the review xD

I just want to let you know, I tried to the way its formatted, but it kept doing this :P It is supposed to be more centered,......Ya sorry about that.

So I have decided to add more to this........

Thankyou so much :)

hahaha sorry the second the isnt supposed to be there. I thought it deleted, but I guess not. but thankyou so much :)

Keep it up :)

Thank you so much. All of the poems so far, including this one, actually happen to be going into a book that I am trying to get published. Your criticism ...

thankyou so much. And I agree about the word. I am trying to decide which to use for editing it.

I did enjoy it very much. your welcome.