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Re: Him
Hello, Brittany here to review, for fun. :D Wow I love your poem, it is really good and sad but sweet all at once. Good punctuation and Grammar. I like ...
Mon Feb 25, 2013 12:54 pm -
Re: Haze (Ch. 1)
Hello, my name is Brittany and I'm here to review your piece of work. :) First off I'd like to say you did a really good job, except for a ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 5:46 pm -
Re: Do We Remember Our Wishes?
Hello, Brittany here to do a review. I liked your poem, except for a tiny few changes need to be made. I for one, am not used to the writing ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:27 am -
Re: A Potion to Make You Smarter
Hello Veeren, I am here to review you on this lovely night. I actually like the flow of the poem. Also this poem seems very unique, I could never come ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:21 am -
Re: Regretville
hello, im brittany, here to do a review. I like where you are going with this song, all you really need is a tune and to actually sing it. lol, ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:03 am -
Re: You
Brittany here to do a review. Reading this poem, in my opinion, doesn't really have any voice to it. To me, it is just.. there and not going anywhere like ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:53 am -
Re: Lips Red as Blood
Brittany here to review. :) Like barefootrunner said, it just isn't in script format at all. I read it but then had to stop because it was so confusing without ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:47 am -
Re: Short Script
Brittany here to give a review. Well it was funny, but I sort of don't get the point. Not trying to be rude but I just didn't understand a lot ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:42 am -
Re: Fifteen Minutes
Hello, Brittany here for a review! Firstly I'd have to say I love the script. I would just like to offer some advice, when you tell us what they are ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:37 am -
Re: Ballroom dance. Update!
Hello, brittany here to review. Good job. I really liked it, you should write more and post it here. I liked the mysterious feeling I had when I was reading ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:30 am -
Re: Lullaby
Hello Brittany here to review you. First I'd like to say you did a good job on your poem. The first mistake I saw was that you used the word ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:23 am -
Re: Behind my eyes
Hello brittany here to review you. I like the way it flows and rhymes. :) Fantastic job on that. I also can see what you are saying so good job ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:18 am -
Re: Facade
My name is brittany and im here to review you. :) I know this comes from your heart and I can tell by what it is saying. A few errors ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:11 am -
Re: I wish...
Hello there silverfin, I am here to review you. I love the poem :) it was very cute and the best I have seen all night. Besides your spelling caught ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 6:03 am -
Re: The first time
Hello, Brittany, from Team P.A.M.B.O. is here to help you see the errors in your ways. First off, this little sentence right here "I knew with practise, made perfect" you ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 5:55 am
