This song inspired me to make this scene.
Please tell me what ya think or the song makes this scene better.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4L8dV6QOXVU
As I walk in the dark halls of my family's old mansion, I often thought this hallway was the...most haunting of them all. My gaze shifted from painting to painting of rather gruesome images. "Fairy Tales are more real than you imagine" my old man use to say. However these paintings seem to look like some of the stories I heard growing up. I felt a sense of dread when I looked upon one that had a Wolf covered in a bloody tethered robe, behind the wolf was a girl in a crimson stained dress with pieces of it missing.
That look in her eyes......I knew them somehow. Before I could get a closer look I heard foot steps behind me at the end of the hallway. I turned around and saw my family's butler. I smiled and waved at him. With a bow he began to question my whereabouts. Soon after I told him I needed to "get a breath of fresh air" He started scolding me for lying and said I was simply "Trying to avoid my guests". Quickly getting back in the main hall was not that great of a idea at first. My eyes needed to adjust to the bright lights and vibrant colors around the room. People around the main floor was dancing around to silly music. Not to mention silly clothes and masks that go with them. It was a Mask party if you haven't guessed by now. Except in my family traditions the clothes and masks you wore suited your personality. Girls with rabbit masks meant that they was hard to catch but they had a charming sense that almost made you "want" to chase them. Men who wore dog masks simply meant they was loyal, wanting a companion to be with.
Mine? I don't like such things, but the butler insisted I wore my mask. Telling me that I needed to find a girl and stop being a shadow beyond the sun.
If there was one girl that could help me with my "conditions". I would gladly take her. Unfortunately I have yet to find one.
Never did like these ballroom dances but I went done in the crowds anyways. But once I did, there was a strange girl. Hair that look as gold. Her eyes glowed a bright blue....so...beautifully crafted but so....hypnotic. The smile she gave was sweeter than a apple pie.
She saw me as she was dancing within the crowds of others. I couldn't stop staring, my heart beat started going faster. Why? why did she look so...tempting? I started making my way toward her.
With a nod of her head, I slowly made my way through the crowd. As I came closer to this girl my head started spinning, Everything became a blur except her. Her eyes almost had a venomous...no hypnotic stare. My senses started to dull as soon as I took her hand, we started to dance at a slow pace. I felt weak, but at the same time relived. I swore she was smiling more and more when we danced at a faster pace. Everyone around me had a look of shock and despair. My mind snap back into reality when I let go of her hand. Everyone...around me...they we're all dead. I heard laughter from behind me. As I turn and looked the girl was in a crimson stained dress. "Red Waltz" she said with a low voice.
To be continued.
Go ahead and tear the whole thing to pieces. haha
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