briggsy1996

Hi there, I'll get down to the wire since any nitpicks I might've thought of have escaped me now that I've finished reading. I legitimately felt as though I was ...

Hi there! Personally I liked the last opener the best and I'll do my best to explain why. First off, it's the only one you've listed here with dialogue- not ...

Hi there! This was excellent! I like how she's arguing back and forth with herself throughout the story- it makes it so interesting to read. The content overall was sad, ...

Hi there, this poem is very moving. Although a lot of specifics weren't mentioned, I felt as though this was very rich with emotions. It's raw, and also very solid, ...

Hi there! I love this piece; it has some excellent imagery and has a great overall flow. I don't have anything to critique- I just wanted to say that it ...

Hi there! I have several things to say about this little chunk of writing here, so let me start of with this: I really liked it! It was genuinely well ...

Hi there, I would say that you have a very solid poem going here. I read it over several times, trying to find something to suggest to you to make ...

Hi there, I really like what you've got going here- as the start of a story it has some potential. There were a few things that didn't sit well with ...

Hi there, This is very confusing, subject wise, I have to admit. But my oh my, it's so beautifully written! Your rhyming scheme doesn't waver at all- you didn't miss ...

Hi there, For starters, I really liked this and because romance stories are my favourite genre, I will be keeping tabs on this story. I think that you could really ...

Hi there, This was deep. Like, really quite deep. I don't really have any nitpicks, so I'll get on to my overall thoughts: The flow of this letter is really ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS :) I don't have any nitpicks so I'll get right into my overall thoughts. I like this, because even though it's fairly short, it's ...

Hi there! Ah, monologues- there are my most favourite thing in the world; so many memories of drama class... Anyway, I really like this! It's easy to picture the character ...

Hi there! Let me start off by saying that I absolutely loved this- I am quite the sucker for romance. I'll give you my overall thoughts in a moment, but ...

Hi there, This was so amazingly sweet- I loved it! The overall tone of your poem was great;flowy and soft, which sets a romantic feel. Your use of metaphors is ...