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Re: Confession
Who cares about the details? Poerty is not all about is this something of your life? that You experienced? It sucks!
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: Drunk Punks, Cigarettes & Gin
It was ok. I can't really find the point it though.
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Fire
Uh,, ok...what were you on when you wrote that? LOL JK....Well ya interesting. I guess. O.o
Mar 26, 2007 -
Re: Maybe
This is good. Very simple, but good. I think every girl thinks this way about the person they want. Keep up the good work. :)
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Because Of You
This is good. I think people who come from tough homes can relate to this. Or from an abusive relationship. I know that 2yrs ago this poem would express me ...
Mar 22, 2007 -
Re: Nameless Poem
What's the point to this poem? It's good. But what is the point? I think that poems should have a point to it. But right now, this just sounds like ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: More Than One
It's ok. But what are you talking about??? Are you dating this Michael or is it just a crush. you dont; make any sense about what you're talking about. Good, ...
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: Life
I totally agree with you. Life is way to short for what-if's. So you might as well live it to the fullest. Unlike everyone else, I think it's a great ...
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: Time
This was good. And I agree...what is time? Good writing. Keep it up!!!
Mar 20, 2007 -
Re: The Center
This is really harsh. It's good for free verse, but also very rude. I like it, just as long as it's not directed at me. LOL JK... But anyways, keep ...
Nov 16, 2006
