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  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: Tantrum.

    Hey Mandrake! I'm seriously considering the idea that everything you write is now fodder for my brain. I love everything you write, with your 'strange' humor, quirky plot lines and ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi; 2.1

    Hey Cesare! You continue writing these chapters really fast, and that's awesome. At least I'm still able to keep up with these so far. Back for chapter two, part one. ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Just An Average Girl

    Hey, IAmMe! This was quite an enjoyable read. Despite dealing with some depressing subjects, it still reads as almost a pick-me up, and it kind of warms me inside to ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 2: The Spell

    Hey Confused! Took a few days, but I've finally returned to your second chapter. I really liked your first chapter, especially the two characters it mainly involved. You wrote them ...

    May 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi;1.2

    Hey Cesare! You've got a new chapter up! As well as a new title! That's pretty awesome. As I said in the previous chapter, your writing has definately improved after ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Yesterday - Where's my light? (Pending title)

    Hey Subtle! So, I'm not sure I've reviewed any of your work before, but I will now. And I quite liked this. Your opening to this piece is pretty good. ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 1: Enemies We Were, What Are We Now?

    Hey Confused! So, I was planning on giving some thoughts on this last night, but I suddenly got pulled away. Tonight, I struggled finding this again as I forgot its ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: The Rose

    Hey Brunnera! So, often when I review, there's usually a lot of criticism I can bring up. However, I struggled to find a lot to comment on here. At least ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Amalia: the little garden gnome Chapter 1

    Hey Pinkie! Though I'm a few days late, I guess I should start off with a belated welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy yourself here. Well, I suppose you ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of A Cold Heart (Part VII)

    Hey Silver! Yay! You posted another chapter in this awesome series. I'm really loving it so far. And in this one you even added a very special character. That is ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 3 Part 2

    Hey Noelle! Alright, you finally posted another part. It's about time! ;) I actually quite liked this part, mainly because we might finally see this girl with 'stars in her ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Vampirisi (Vampirial II); 1.1

    Hey Cesare! So you've decided to write another novella as a follow-up to Vampirial. That's really awesome! Seeing as I've read and reviewed that entire other series, I'm definately up ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    Hey Swampy! Welcome to YWS! I really hope you enjoy yourself here. Here for a quick review, though there's not too much to comment on. Well, I guess I should ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Chapter 5 - Well Hello There Batman and Alfred...

    Hey Ginga! So, unbeknownst to me, you have already published your next chapter. And it's even been out here for a week. Well, I've finally gotten around to it, so ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Pretty Faces

    Hey Leonora! I have to say, this work really got to me. I thought this was an excellent piece of writing. I'm actually a bit surprised at myself for how ...

    May 11, 2014


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