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Hello Munchkin! :) Just stopped by to have a look at your story so here we go. I quite enjoyed this story. I've always kind of enjoyed the Supernatural and ...

Hi CrazyGirl! I was just about to look over this on your blog when I saw that you'd posted here. Glad you got enough points to post :) So you ...

Hi there Dilettante :) Just stopping by to have a look at your story here. I'm wondering why you posted the beginning and then something from Chapter 5? I'd love ...

Hey there AwesomeSauce! Hope you're enjoying the site and I love your name! Just stopped by to have a quick look at your story. So let's start with some nitpicks ...

Hi there Foreverfree! So let's have a look at what you've got here :) I like your concept. The world of Magicia sounds very interesting and I like the idea ...

Hi There :) Just having a quick look over your story here. Nit picky wise the only thing I could find was - [b]if you were to go away or ...

Hey Murteh! Here at last! I just want to forewarn you, you’ve got a lot of very detailed reviews already and I haven’t read any of them, so apologies if ...

Hey Wakegirl! :) So one nit picky thing to get out of the way at the beginning is to just be careful of your punctuation when coming out of dialogue. ...

Hey Lili :) Let's take a look see at your story then! The first thing I notice is that you tend to miss out little words that are kind of ...

Caaaaaaaadi! I'm finally here, I sort of forgot as I tend to do! Just a couple of things to note - In the first dinner scene where Harper storms off ...

Hey Pea! If I were being really picky I would say that, for a film script, this isn't properly formatted but that can be easily fixed :) You usually indicate ...

Hey Snikkia :) My major problem with this script is that you don't tell us any setting. I know it's a script and in scripts you tend to have more ...

Hey Pea! This probably isn't going to be a very helpful review! The two mistakes I noticed were that you called the baby Connor and in the next paragraph it ...

Hey azntwinz2 :) She wriggled on her back, flexing her muscles sore as the cries she expelled resounded in silence. - I think this sentence is a little awkward word ...

Hey Kirahh :) I looked through the party, trying to find my targets through the crowd of people. - I don't like the repetition here with the word 'through'. Perhaps ...