barefootrunner

Hi there! Me again, ready for another review! Honestly though, I hope I never meet someone who'd been through something like that. I would be able to help them. I'd ...

Hi there! I'm here to review your prologue :) Firstly, here are a few grammar and spelling errors I was able to find: This ruler became a conduit of the ...

Hi there! Just a quick review for you. I hope you're enjoying the site so far :) I liked to read this, but felt that it was rather purple in ...

Hi there! Yes! Another Amythest Night! You're obviously doing something right because you've managed to pull me into the story completely. Great work! Okay, so down to business. Now, students ...

Hi there! Another review for you, before I retire for the night :) In this chapter, I liked the way the relationship between prof Gupta and Ratan was shown in ...

Hi there! Yup, it's me and I'm back for a review on this happy review day :D Great! There's some real action going on and it seems we've reached the ...

Hi there! Back for yet another review :) I find this piece an improvement on the previous one. There is a lot more substance to it. My first critique, and ...

Hi there! A short review for a short chapter :) In this chapter, very little happens at all. In fact, there is no distinguishing action happening! A chapter should always ...

Hi there! I'm once again back for more :) Okay, so now you are really going in for a lot of political and moralistic statements. You say, through your character, ...

Hi there! Okay, here's yet another review :) I feel that you keep improving the more you write! You have some more character development going on and a little more ...

Hi there! Right—let's get straight into it. Firstly, I liked this chapter. It was quite funny, light and generally entertaining :) This was probably my favorite of all the Operation ...

Hi there! Back again. And happy review day once more! Now, firstly I'm wondering why this piece is called Operation Imperial at all. It makes it sound like a spy ...

Hi there! Back again :) Happy review day once more! Okay, so grammar aside, I'm going to look at what we know about your main character by now. - He ...

Hi there :) I'm back for another review! Okay, so my first thought was that, as a woman, I do not like your main character's attitude towards women at all. ...

Hi there! Okay, so a quick review for you :) and happy review day! Once again, I'm going to call you on your grammar. You really need to work on ...