ballerina13

Brilliant. Everything rhymed and your poem flowed very well. My favorite part was probably the part where he was deciding what to write. Great job.

I loved this piece! It showed so much emotion of the character and depth. It shows those feelings that we all get. It touches on just about every level. Excellent ...

This was interesting but, it does not really flow in my opinion. You could use more adjectives to help. Don't get me wring. I liked this piece alot. It just ...

I really liked this. I see that other people have already mentioned the errors. This piece was intriguing. I enjoyed the concept and thought that you had very good imagery. ...

I really like this piece. There was so much truth and depth behind all of it! It really expresses emotion and who people feel at times. It drew me in ...

Wonderful piece. It had great imagry and depth. There were not many errors and it flowed pretty well. Again, it had great imagry. I could see it all happening.

Interesting piece but, it did not really seem to flow. It had great voice and showed the emotion of how people feel when there is a conflict. Excellent; it really ...

I love this poem! Amazing! It really showed emotion and depth. But alas, it was heart wrenching. Still, a beautiful poem.

This was a very interesting piece. Also, very amusing! Good job.

This is a very well written piece. I very much enjoyed it! It really shows how true friends act and care for each other. Well done! *Gold Star*

Again, this was wonderful. There are so many ways a reader leave with from this poem and this type of poetry. It had a lot of depth and showed the ...

I thought that this poem had a lot of depth, telling about the pain one suffers when they put there heart on their sleeve. It was beautiful in a sad ...

This wonderful. It truly showed the strength it takes be in a sport. Great job.

Genus! This will not be forgotten for awhile! How did you find out about this? Amazing. It can be insightful, silly and interesting at the same time. A wonderful poem.

I thought that this poem had a lot of depth and a intake of how people react to there decisions of how they are. It was very insightful. I enjoyed ...