babydollblues

This is such a cool concept and would love the read the story these are involved in! Especially the last one, what a mysterious figure the wait is! I would ...

I like what you're saying here but your poem doesn't flow well. It's choppy and doesn't bring your point across as well as it could. The last line is particularly ...

As the previous reviewer said, you used quite a bit of repetition throughout. While sometimes repetition can be worn out and overused, this works well with the flow of your ...

I loved your poem and the subject of it. The poem had a very calm feeling to it, very 'sit back and take everything in'. The only problem I had ...

I'm just going to go through and point out stuff I would change or point out little grammar errors and also what I like about your first chapter. In the ...

I don't see quite a bit of haiku poems on here so I commend you on being unique in this aspect. Haiku poems can be a bit tricky with content ...

I've got to be honest with you, I don't know much about Hamilton but I like your poem and I feel like I needed to review. First off, the repetition ...

I'm going to start with what I like about your poem and end with what i would suggest changing. Your use of repetition was well-used, phenomenal in fact. Using "She's ...

Hoo boy, I haven't wrote a review in quite some time so please bear with me. First off, I would like to tell you this poem really spoke to me ...

Your poem flowed incredibly well and your use of imagery was amazing. I love the running metaphor of rain and this poem can be taken several ways with that metaphor. ...

I loved your rhyme scheme, it really brought the whole poem together. I particularly liked the last few lines of your poem. Comparing the lady or person in question to ...

Your friend's poem is written nicely but the format can use a little work. They have a lot of lines and it really needs punctuation to fit them all together, ...

This poem was very well put together! I enjoyed reading it and the only thing I really have a problem with is the bouncing themes but it is mostly an ...

Your poem had a lot of amazing words that I am glad you used in this piece of work. You have a few places that can be touched up on. ...

Your short story was well written but you have a few things that could be brushed up on. I do not believe your comma usage is a huge problem, there ...