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Hey, thank you for your personal emotions put down for whom ever stumbles across this. There is really not much point to correct grammar or spelling because I doubt you ...

Avidav for a review here, some of this might already have been said I only skimmed the other comments. It seems as if they covered the grammar pretty well, so ...

Hey, avidav for a review. This was a good simple piece telling a story of two friends who grow apart. Which is what usually happens to childhood friends. I like ...

Hey, This was a pretty enjoyable Read, the story was sadly pretty basic, but thankfully told in a more interesting way. I can tell you have a lot of creativity ...

Hey avidav for a review. This was pretty cool thanks for keeping it short. Some of the stories on here stress me out at the length. It did feel more ...

Avidav for a review. I don't review anything unless I like it or its really short so take comfort in that. It had a great beginning like niraco said. It ...

This is a great start that puts the reader in the middle of what I'm guessing is a vampire love story. The writing is beautiful, and for an on the ...

I loved this. I'm new to YWS and have been enjoying clicking random pages and reading short stories, so after reading some should we say not so great works, yours ...

Haha I'm with bloodink on this one it was very weird to read, but also somewhat entertaining because of it. I did enjoy it mostly just because it was short ...

Hey avidav for a review. I really enjoyed this read it kept me intrigued almost the whole time which is a big deal for me because once I get bored ...

avidav to review I really do like Existentialism much like Orwell's 1984 negative utopia their's something enjoyable about reading where there is nothing to enjoy. for a short story its ...

avidav attempting a review. first off I would like to say short stories less than 1000 characters are usually the best to read simply because it shows great skill in ...

hey its my first review, so if this doesn't make sense... sorry. (= this is very nice piece of work, I love the double view point. which I usually don't ...