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  • Short Story » Romantic, Humor
    Re: of costars, garlic and onions

    Hello, I’m just stopping in for a quick review! For starters, I am a sucker for this kind of romantic comedy concept. I remember reading books similar to this in ...

    Dec 23, 2022


  • Hello!! Just stopping in for a quick review. I think the concept of this is super cool. I love thinking about how poetry is everywhere: even in places you don’t ...

    Dec 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Horror, Humor
    Re: Trick Or Treat

    Hi! Just dropping in for a quick review. I thought this poem was very fun! I enjoyed the was your piece was structured. I also really liked the little plot ...

    Nov 10, 2021

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic
    Re: Red, the color I saw

    Hi! Just dropping in for a quick review. I really liked the meaning behind the poem. Everybody sees things different, and what somebody thinks is reality is different from someone ...

    Nov 9, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: And I'm okay

    Hi! Just dropping in for a bit of a review. I really liked the concept of your poem and the message, I just think I'm a little confused by the ...

    Nov 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: i am always writing about stars

    Hi! Just dropping in for a bit of a review. So first of all, I think this poem is so lovely. I love your diction and the way you describe ...

    Nov 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Enslaved

    Hi! First of all, this is such a powerful poem. The way you describe guilt is really cool. I related to this poem a lot in many ways that I ...

    Sep 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Your Grave is Empty.

    Hi! I think this poem is very good, I'm just mildly confused on the meaning. I'll get to that in a second though. I love the diction in this poem. ...

    Sep 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Nonsense

    This poem is very adorable! I loved the Dr. Seuss vibes it gave me. i will say the rhythm is kind of off. I think it would be good to ...

    Sep 20, 2021


  • Wow I don’t even know where to start with this. First of all, I love the entire idea of the poem. We’re all trying to pretend to be something we’re ...

    Jul 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature
    Re: Presently Absent

    I wanted to write like an extensive review about this that like critiqued everything, but honestly, there's nothing to change that I personally see and there are no words(funny considering ...

    Sep 20, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: No title

    Hi, this was a really descriptive and wonderful poem you made! I don't see very much wrong with it other than you forgot to punctuate certain words at the beginning ...

    Aug 27, 2019

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Apathy-Poem

    This is less a review and more of an answer to your question from a personal view because I find this topic interesting. So I think, in this case, our ...

    Aug 27, 2019

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Things I'm Bad At

    I love love love love love love love love this so much! Many people, including me, can definitely relate to this in some way. Maybe not the last part as ...

    Jul 31, 2019

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: Oh Father

    Hi! So, I love this poem a lot. You expressed your emotion beautifully. The rhyming was great, and your punctuation was perfect, However, you used the wrong "you're" in the ...

    May 11, 2019


Proud people breed sad sorrows for themselves.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights