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Hi, I saw this in the green room and thought I'd give it a quick review. Overall, there weren't many issues and I really enjoyed this piece but I did ...

Hi, I thought I'd leave you a quick review! So, one thing I noticed were sentence lengths. This is something of a personal preference and although there is nothing wrong ...

I really enjoyed this so thought I'd give a few comments on your work. Firstly, I particularly liked the fact you suggested the Kaminsky's weren't a typical family. This creates ...

Firstly, this sounds like it has great promise to be an excellent piece of literature. I like how it would incorporate both the thriller/mystery genre into a romantic backstory. This ...

A really good piece! I am enjoying this a lot. I didn't have time to read the whole publishing but I have read the first bit. I am really impressed ...

Hi, here to leave a review on your already great piece of work! So overall, this is a great start to this part and I really enjoyed reading this. I ...

Hi again, returning to review more of your amazing work! Another great bit of writing here! A few comments, One of my key points I like to make to MANY ...

I really enjoyed this, and this review will get you out of the greenroom too. After glancing at what a fellow reviewer had already mentioned, my main comment would be ...

A lovely start! I've picked out a couple of things that could help to make it even better: I found the first sentence a bit too lengthy, this is more ...

I really liked this piece and overall the quality of the writing is pretty good. My only suggestions would be to vary sentence starters and word choice. For example, in ...

The content of this is super great! I love the general idea of the piece and is definitely a good start. I'd suggest that you use more short sentences instead ...