asweeney1919

why did you say ( This Old, This Old dream)

i like the story but i would discribe it better like what was he doing when he was wating for the tribe?

i realy liked the story keep wrighting more from aj

Another older work... What do you think?? We paint our skins beautiful with arts of ink rings and studs We paint our outside beautiful with make-up and hair dye clothes ...

cool

Shall I throw pennies in a well, making magic wishes? or shall I toss my dreams upon a falling blue star? Should I see a fourtune teller, watch her deal ...

i realy loved it

i realy liked it

i like it but i don't get how its about pick ing at your nail polish but i raly liked it

i fixed some of it hope you like it

i realy like your story so keep up the good work. and write more scary storys

thaNX I LIKE THE REPY

i like the poem

deep and heartfilled