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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A peom of lines

    Hi there I'm here to review A peom of lines/ I noticed how everything but the last 3rd line is not capitilized. Until the fourth stanza then that ends that. ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 1:38 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Why?

    This reminded me so much of my ex boyfriend wow. (He cheated on me and was very controlling now that I think about it. ) Anyway. I really felt this ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 1:15 pm
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dear Beautiful

    Hi I am here to review your work :) Dear Beautiful, Thank you for writing this.I don't know if you wrote this for someone specifically. But hey I read it ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 12:45 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: My love

    "My Love" Hello there. I'm here to write a review! Alrighty let's get started. I am very very confused about the formatting. Why is it like this? I understand it's ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 12:40 pm
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: .

    Prison (Haiku) Review: :) Nice rhythm to start out! It had the perfect 5-7-5 syllables nice!I laughed a little at it. Short Ode to Coffee: Okay I noticed there was ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 12:29 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: DUET :Chapter 1:

    Okay hey. I am excited to do a review of Duet. It seems well written from the first glance so I'm ready to go! ((Also I'm writing the commentary on ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 7:25 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Scarred Memories

    Ah hello there! I like how this starts out ( "I hate my scars..".) You used similes to make this poem come to life. You're actually being real about this ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 7:11 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Concurred Kingdom

    Aye. The folder title of this was kind of ironic. Poetic failure? No no this was actually really good!Okay I loved the repetition. ("Our kingdom is bent") And I loved ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 6:58 am
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: The Story of a 7-year old

    This is really cute I love it! I remember writing poems for my sister when I was little so yeah this is really cute! This is short and sweet and ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 6:43 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Everything in Between

    Hey hey I hope you're well! Okay. So I am here to review. (I'm trying okay please forgive me if this isn't exactly helpful) Okay: First of all, beautiful piece. ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 5:24 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tears, worms, and cotton candy

    I really like this. Like other comments have said, everyone has those days. And honestly I love how you wrote this out. Okay so now time for a review, Okay, ...

    Sun May 31, 2015 5:10 am


Only the suppressed word is dangerous.
— Ludwig Borne