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Re: A peom of lines
Hi there I'm here to review A peom of lines/ I noticed how everything but the last 3rd line is not capitilized. Until the fourth stanza then that ends that. ...
Sun May 31, 2015 1:38 pm -
Re: Why?
This reminded me so much of my ex boyfriend wow. (He cheated on me and was very controlling now that I think about it. ) Anyway. I really felt this ...
Sun May 31, 2015 1:15 pm -
Re: Dear Beautiful
Hi I am here to review your work :) Dear Beautiful, Thank you for writing this.I don't know if you wrote this for someone specifically. But hey I read it ...
Sun May 31, 2015 12:45 pm -
Re: My love
"My Love" Hello there. I'm here to write a review! Alrighty let's get started. I am very very confused about the formatting. Why is it like this? I understand it's ...
Sun May 31, 2015 12:40 pm -
Re: .
Prison (Haiku) Review: :) Nice rhythm to start out! It had the perfect 5-7-5 syllables nice!I laughed a little at it. Short Ode to Coffee: Okay I noticed there was ...
Sun May 31, 2015 12:29 pm -
Re: DUET :Chapter 1:
Okay hey. I am excited to do a review of Duet. It seems well written from the first glance so I'm ready to go! ((Also I'm writing the commentary on ...
Sun May 31, 2015 7:25 am -
Re: Scarred Memories
Ah hello there! I like how this starts out ( "I hate my scars..".) You used similes to make this poem come to life. You're actually being real about this ...
Sun May 31, 2015 7:11 am -
Re: Concurred Kingdom
Aye. The folder title of this was kind of ironic. Poetic failure? No no this was actually really good!Okay I loved the repetition. ("Our kingdom is bent") And I loved ...
Sun May 31, 2015 6:58 am -
Re: The Story of a 7-year old
This is really cute I love it! I remember writing poems for my sister when I was little so yeah this is really cute! This is short and sweet and ...
Sun May 31, 2015 6:43 am -
Re: Everything in Between
Hey hey I hope you're well! Okay. So I am here to review. (I'm trying okay please forgive me if this isn't exactly helpful) Okay: First of all, beautiful piece. ...
Sun May 31, 2015 5:24 am -
Re: Tears, worms, and cotton candy
I really like this. Like other comments have said, everyone has those days. And honestly I love how you wrote this out. Okay so now time for a review, Okay, ...
Sun May 31, 2015 5:10 am
