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Re: White Heron {1}
Hey hey hey I am here for a review. Overall this was a really good starting chapter. Though there are things I would like to point out. "I do remember ...
Thu Jun 18, 2015 6:01 pm -
Re: Pills / Needles
Hey there I'm here to review. Haha let's get started! Wow this is deep. I remember the last relationship I was in. He was abusive- but verbally. But I understood ...
Tue Jun 16, 2015 9:03 pm -
Re: Dead girls.
Hello I'm here to write a review. Okay haha, let's get started I really like how this poem was written. Stanza One: I like how you talked about how she ...
Tue Jun 16, 2015 8:39 pm -
Re: The Things That Cannot Be
Hey I am here for a review.I hope all is well. Okay let's get started!!!!! I really like the vagueness in this story. As in like no names whatsoever, just ...
Tue Jun 16, 2015 2:32 pm -
Re: The single key
Hey there I am here to review yay! Okay let's get started First of all I really liked this poem.The detail put in this was very good and I salute ...
Tue Jun 16, 2015 1:06 am -
Re: Shiny Black Shoes
Hello there I am here for a review yay! Okay let's get started! Over all I liked this poem. It's deep and well written.You have done a great job conveying ...
Mon Jun 15, 2015 5:44 pm -
Re: The Death Of William Bristowe
Hey there I'm Ash and I'm happy to write a review! :) First of all when I seen your piece. Wow. You write so realistically.Your eye for detail is incredible ...
Sun Jun 14, 2015 10:59 pm -
Re: This I Believe: Promises Aren't Real
This is a very well written essay! Fantastic job! I relate to this well . Especially about the friends you were BFFS with in middle school.And how you guys drifted ...
Fri Jun 12, 2015 1:10 am -
Re: the most astounding fact
I really liked the style you wrote this in. And this poem was all space themed basically (as you can see I love space aha) I love how you spaced ...
Fri Jun 12, 2015 12:57 am -
Re: Oh...sweet Carcosa. Let the King bless you in his magnificent yellow...
I honestly liked this. My only advice is to read this over and make sure everything is correct grammatically and word choice. And to be honest you had just a ...
Wed Jun 10, 2015 8:37 pm -
Re: I See a Fantasy
Honestly this was well described. I do not mean to be rude however, but if this is a poetry, what type of poem is this? Next time, please put in ...
Wed Jun 10, 2015 12:54 am -
Re: Our Nation's Problem - A Poem (for the armed forces)
Our Nation's Problems: Hi I am here to review this aha. Okay let's get started! First of all thank you so much for writing this. I have family in the ...
Mon Jun 08, 2015 10:15 pm -
Re: Church
Hey I'm Ash and I am here to write a review: Okay so like-wow. I liked this poem. But please don't base church completely off of people's dumb actions and ...
Sun Jun 07, 2015 12:50 pm -
Re: i sat in the almost too tall grass
Hi I'm Ash and I am here to write a review!! :) Alright, let's get started. The first sentence,is a run on sentence. "I sat in the almost too tall ...
Sun Jun 07, 2015 12:38 pm -
Re: Big Business
Big Buisness Hey I'm Ash and I'm here to review! I hope I can be of any assistance. First Paragraph: I like how you started with "a small fragment of ...
Sat Jun 06, 2015 3:26 am