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Re: Video Game Rap
Hahah I read this and it made my day. I like how you incorporated titles and references from video games into the poem/rap.Some of it, like Lumi, said appears to ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Define 'Nefarious'
What a peculiar word to define.I love how you added your own personal definition to the word. I especially like the line "It shifts and slides under your tongue, the ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: the train that once made me stay but not this time
Honestly. I relate to this. I feel the narrators pain and anger. It reminds me of something that recently happened to me. Which is why I really do like feels ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Pree-Scene: The dark woods
Hi bud, as someone who loves reading scripts, I decided to check this out. It is well written You put focus in where it is needed.The characters appear pretty real, ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: empty pages
Hi there, happy review day! Okay, this poem does have something to it. I can see this is given some effort. I suggest you write about each line separately. With ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: At the End is Ashley: 1
Hey hey happy review day!! Okay I am here to review let us get started shall we? The overall plot seems interesting, and I do hope that there will be ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Za Role play
Hi bud. My name is Ash (or Jelly). Anyway, this caught my eye. Okay so this is a roleplay thing. I do roleplay . Mostly on virtual space however. (You ...
Nov 26, 2016 -
Re: The Favoured One
Hello my name is Ash (or Jelly, whatever you want), and I am here to review. now since this is a poem I am going to review/analyze it verse by ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Naive
Hi, yeah I agree with Moonwatcher. Please change the rating to 18+. I see you are also new to the welcome bud! I see this is more of a rant ...
Nov 13, 2016 -
Re: What did we do Wrong ~ A Bullying Awareness Poem
Hello. As a bullying survivor myself, thank you.I read this and it brought tears to my eyes. I have been put through many bad experiences, and I am starting to ...
Nov 13, 2016 -
Re: Feature Presentation
Hey there my name is Jelly! I just came here to read this, because I love reading screenplays. (I really am a theatre kid like I work backstage but I ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Life
Hi hi, my name is Jelly and I am here to review! I hope you are having a wonderful day. First of all, thank you for this. I needed this ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: A Thousand Words
Hello I'm Ash (or Jelly. Either name is fine), and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now! Wow wow wow wow ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: Delete
Hello I'm Ash (or Jelly. Either name is fine), and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now! Can I start with ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: I want to be like Google
Hi I'm Ash and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now! I like how you wrote this. It was funny and ...
Jun 20, 2016