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Hahah I read this and it made my day. I like how you incorporated titles and references from video games into the poem/rap.Some of it, like Lumi, said appears to ...

What a peculiar word to define.I love how you added your own personal definition to the word. I especially like the line "It shifts and slides under your tongue, the ...

Honestly. I relate to this. I feel the narrators pain and anger. It reminds me of something that recently happened to me. Which is why I really do like feels ...

Hi bud, as someone who loves reading scripts, I decided to check this out. It is well written You put focus in where it is needed.The characters appear pretty real, ...

Hi there, happy review day! Okay, this poem does have something to it. I can see this is given some effort. I suggest you write about each line separately. With ...

Hey hey happy review day!! Okay I am here to review let us get started shall we? The overall plot seems interesting, and I do hope that there will be ...

Hi bud. My name is Ash (or Jelly). Anyway, this caught my eye. Okay so this is a roleplay thing. I do roleplay . Mostly on virtual space however. (You ...

Hello my name is Ash (or Jelly, whatever you want), and I am here to review. now since this is a poem I am going to review/analyze it verse by ...

Hi, yeah I agree with Moonwatcher. Please change the rating to 18+. I see you are also new to the welcome bud! I see this is more of a rant ...

Hello. As a bullying survivor myself, thank you.I read this and it brought tears to my eyes. I have been put through many bad experiences, and I am starting to ...

Hey there my name is Jelly! I just came here to read this, because I love reading screenplays. (I really am a theatre kid like I work backstage but I ...

Hi hi, my name is Jelly and I am here to review! I hope you are having a wonderful day. First of all, thank you for this. I needed this ...

Hello I'm Ash (or Jelly. Either name is fine), and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now! Wow wow wow wow ...

Hello I'm Ash (or Jelly. Either name is fine), and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now! Can I start with ...

Hi I'm Ash and I am here to review! I hope all is well. Okay I'm going to start now! I like how you wrote this. It was funny and ...