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Hey, Firestalker! You left a comment on my Post Work thread in the group and I'm here answering it :wink: All my comments are in bold, all corrections in red. ...

Yeah, King, I felt the dream was kind of confusing :? I was slightly put off by it. Like, what exactly was happening? You probably should clear that up for ...

Hello, KingKamor. I'm just going to do a chapter-by-chapter review since you posted all of your chapters in one thread. Chapter One : This was a solid beginning. It brought ...

Yeah, JC, this was beautifully written. You really connected with your reader and established a kind of connection with them. You made them feel apart of what you were creating ...

'ello Kelsey! I see that you have another new story that I'm super excited to read about! I know you won't disappoint :wink: Hehe And you definitely didn't! Omgosh, that ...

Ladydark, you have a good beginning her but unless you are going to continue slightly looses its powerfulness. :wink: I feel like this is a rough sketch of something bigger ...

This was good! :D I thought the flow was really nice and you seemed to have many things going for you. The only thing that kind of made it choppy ...

This story is getting so deep, Dommy! You really are doing well with this! :D The only thing that kind of bugged me is Ethan’s reaction to the whole thing. ...

Dommy, this was such a good chapter! You really expressed your MC’s feelings in this. I felt so bad for her! And how could her friends just ditch her. She’s ...

Satina, I think you just made me cry. I can barely see the computer screen cause my vision is all blurry. It was that good. :cry: You made me bawl! ...

This is so crazy. Are they like summoning demons or what? I really want to know! *sighs in frustration* I guess I will just have to wait for read the ...

Wow, that’s intense. You have such cool ideas for stories :D I am really looking forward to where your imagination will take you this time. I didn’t notice anything wrong ...

Gosh, Satina, your work is so breathtaking that I can’t get enough of it! You are such a sensational writer :D This story was very heart-felt; a tear-jerker. You also ...

I must be honest about Ella. She is quite annoying and rude, isn’t she? It was a welcoming change from all the other MC’s there are out there. So please ...

Okay, I enjoyed this but I felt it was kind of cliché. You gave us all the clues as to who was going to be her secret, her love who ...