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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hidden Fate

    hey Sec1218, First of all I like your poem. The story is nice. Well, it's the first time for me to read a poem telling this story, thought it happens ...

    Jan 9, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Rap of The River: suicidal literature.

    I am IN LOVE with your rap. It's strong, it's full of confidence and strength. I was so attracted that I couldn't realize any mistakes. I just realized one thing; ...

    Nov 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Try.

    Hi, I'm here to review.. First of all, I like the way you're rejecting this person though you seem helpless. Any way.. The thing i couldn't help not noticing is ...

    Nov 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Struggle

    Hello WJK I'm here to review... This is a beautiful piece. It tells much of what i feel myself. I know exactly the emotions you're experiencing. The part i loved ...

    Nov 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: deleted

    Hello TheWeater.. im here to review. First of all, I love your poem. The metaphore & how you described Autumn is very intelligent & so beautiful. The only thing that ...

    Oct 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spider's Web

    hi, ancientforever; this is aseel reviewing ^_^ um, I like your poem.. though I'm not sure I fully understand it. I liked when you said: "With seven eyes all white ...

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Beautiful Imperfect Creation.

    Hi there, um.. i don't really know what to say about your poem.. i loved it.. i find it deep as it did touch me inside. while reading, it made ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Love You

    Hi stargazer You know, you have a very nice piece her. I really, really loved it. I loved it when you said: Ask me to say those empty words and ...

    Jan 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stupid Idea

    Hello 567ajt Your poem is really nice, I loved it. Specially when you said; All my plans are ruined- faith is all I got. Faith is what is needed in ...

    Jan 5, 2012


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