artybirdy

I haven't read the previous chapters, so I find it difficult to understand the situation and connect with the characters. I would have liked it if you gave us descriptions ...

Whew! That was an intense. I loved that the chapter ended at a light note. It reflected Meyer's personality. I could imagine the fighting scene right in front of me. ...

Just to tell you, I review short stories, so I might not be as helpful as you'd probably expected. I found this chapter intense. It was an emotional rollercoaster for ...

I love Lucy and Natsu's friendship. It's . . . innocent and cute. Your story almost felt like a fairy tale to me as it was more realistic. Your descriptions ...

To answer your question: I wouldn't suggest you to combine the paragraphs, else it'll look like a giant wall of text and could put her off. I don't know much ...

I *loved* your use of imagery! You provided an insight into the character’s thoughts and described their feelings. Your sentence structures, e.g. many short sentences, gave me a “floaty” feeling

Does that mean her brother’s the murderer? Wow! I didn’t expect that at all. How can he be so cold-hearted? Despite the fact that I *loved* the plot twist, I ...

This made me sick! It’s downright creepy and horrifying *but* that’s a positive point – your poem was *supposed* to evoke that reaction from us. It’s disturbing and provides confronting ...

I fail to understand why this story hasn’t got any likes or reviews. It’s amazing! I loved every second of it, especially the fact that you left details of “the ...

I have got a question: are they in a film? I’m sorry to say this, but I was confused by the ending. I generally liked your story, but there are ...

I found your poem to be touching and, of course, original! I often find in romantic poems that certain phrases have been repeatedly used, making the poems similar to each ...

The sincerity and honesty in this piece brought a tear to my eye. I loved your rant as I could relate to the feelings portrayed in it. I found it ...

Loved the story! It’s very dramatic, engaging, and quite refreshing! However, I think you need to work more on your descriptions. You *mentioned* Sherry and her parents are mummified, you ...

Wow, this was awesome! Quite terrifying, so naturally, I loved it. However, I have found few areas you can improve in. 1. You’re not consistent with your tenses. Of course, ...

OK, I’m crying! This is such a beautiful piece. It held my interest right until the end – and the last line? Gosh, it struck a chord, really touched my ...