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Hey there. I haven't read the previous chapters, but I think I have an inkling of what's happening here. xD As far as teen romance goes, you clearly know what ...

I really like this chapter too, for many reasons. One was that you've given both your characters clear, distinct voices. I love different they are too. it's cute, but it ...

So, I haven't read the chapter before this, but it seems like were in an escape scene. I liked how even though you took time to describe things, I could ...

Hey there. I loved this! There were so cute and fun and they explored the issue of the werething. It's nice regrouping chapter after what I'm sure was some exciting ...

Wow, you have such a rich and complicated vocabulary. I'm very impressed. And your writing flowed together beautifully, which works perfect for this type of story. One thing I would ...

Hey, it's me. So, I've read a few Burrow chapters, but not the ones right before this. However, this gives me a unique perspective. Right from the beginning, I could ...

Very nice story you have going on here. This chapter was rife with action, problems, and conflict, which is perfect for a second chapter. My one problem was the ammount ...

Hey there. I like how this story is progressing. Last chapter was really intense and I like that you took step back, introduced us to a new character, and allowed ...

Hey there. The other reviewers all ready mentioned all the major stuff, so I'll just give you my grammar nitpicks. First off, new dialogue, meaning dialogue from a new character, ...

Hey there. I loved how you jumped right into the conflict her. We've got a girl in tears with ex-troubles, who also has powers? it's a great, interesting start. I ...

Ahh!!! I still have to wait another chapter for this Epolis. but that's okay. This chapter has made me even more excited for it, which is what you want. First, ...

I loved this chapter. I was hoping the game would happen in this chapter, but I guess I have to wait a little longer. xD I have just a few ...

Hey there! I was lucky in that I got a sneak peak of this chapter. and it's cool to see it all fleshed out. I loved the description of the ...

Hey there. Once again, great job world-building and keeping the action up. You're also doing a great job creating distinct, relate able characters. I love how Alvis make his sister ...

Hey there. Let me start by saying this is super creative. Robots caused the electrical system to fail, throwing technology back and sending society spinning? Great premise! I also love ...