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Hey there! First of all I loved the way you started it. You started all nice and pretty and then jumped right into the action, which caught me by surprise ...

Hey there. Hopefully you're not sick of me yet! Your author's note made laugh, but you definitely have the right attitude! The more criticism you get, the better you'll become. ...

Sorry I posted twice!

I skimmed through the reviews to see if I was repeating things, so hopefully I give you new, relevant information. First, let me give my grammar nitpicks: “Yes, everything is ...

Friend, you have no reason to be nervous. Right from the beginning I could tell I was in good hands as a reader. However, as writers, we can always improve, ...

If I repeat something the other reviewer did, I apologize. I didn't take the time to read it like I usually do, but you know how review days go. xD ...

This is a nice, sweet little piece you've got here. I noticed you use similes a lot, this isn't a bad thing, but be careful not to overuse them. Similes ...

So. Great Characters. Fun Banter. Nice references. Good pacing. I'm still waiting for something crazy to happen though, but moving on... Those glorious nitpicks: A minute or so into their ...

Dean and Sam exchanged incredulous looks at the pronouncement. "What the hell?" They could read the words off each other's faces. I feel like this word read better if it ...

Hey, so, you're probably sick of hearing this, but once again I loved it. Sam and Dean felt perfect. And if I'm not mistaken the opening line referred to Ruby? ...

I loved Sam's reaction to the Tardis. It was cute. And I also really loved their conversation about hell. It was like *face palm* is this really happening? but the ...

Hey there. I'm actually kind of mad that I didn't find this sooner. Supernatural meets Doctor who? It's Genius. I loved it. Some other good stuff, I really like your ...

Hey, so I'll admit, I was a little worried you'd given up on this. But I understand needing more time to write sometimes, and it was definitely worth the wait. ...

Wow. The feelings you described in this poem was extraordinary, and they way your formatted the poem worked perfectly for it's theme. I can't imagine telling a story like this ...

I haven't read the first chapter so I'll just point out little things. Jostled through the throng Clare eventually happened upon Serena. She seemed acceptable to the sad fact her ...