armonia

Umm yeah, i found that if you read a poem after lots of people have replied, they usally have said all that needs to be said and i just starts ...

I liked this and i think they both said it all.

I dont usally say things about poems to people well because im better at stories than i am at poetry and reading my stories that means most my poems stink.....but ...

I dont know it was just there i probably clicked it on an acident...idk ohh well thank you!! :D

I will most definatly keep that in mid wile I continue to write. Thank you for your advice! :-)

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....what they said!!

Yeah i stumped still trying have you (or anyone else) gat any sugestions?

Well I do understand what you guys are saying and thanks. I will consider the tips! I Put double space so when i print it out I have room to ...

I have to say this is my favorite poem because I LOVE CHOCOLATE!!! and apperantly im not alone...YAY for chocolate. I do like the big words to describe this chocolaty ...

Wow, sounds sad, and well you seem mad, but I do like the poem. It shows emotion and feeling. Yes im sure you know that it needs revising, but all ...

I enjoyed this poem, i know how you feel.

Hey, i liked this poem alot. This is really good, nice way to show emotion!

I thought i put something that said it wasnt mine on their but i guess i didnt...I never ment to take credit for someone elses work...I just wanted to see ...

By the way, i didnt write this. Its my bothers poem, he wants feedback

As i said before this is not one of my poems and either is the "thinking of you" poem. they are both my friends that he wrote just because he ...