ariberry97

wow this is super good. i really like this. i like how its simple, and everyone can relate to this. it tells a story of how you just want one ...

well, i don't know what to say. interesting, i guess. confusing, like the other person said. maybe next time not so lengthy, and more on point. other than that, pretty ...

i liked this poem because it was very powerful. it had little mistakes. i liked it:)

honestly, i don't get it. i dont know if im being stupid (most likely, i am) or if this poem really doesn't make sence. either way, i don't like it:(

i like this poem. there were a few mistakes, but over all this is pretty good. i can relae to this poem. i like the meaning in it.

This poem seems like its not serious, and you got it from some joke website or something. Next time, make something more serious. I don't like this because its too ...

I like this. I like this because it's very derect, and i feel like I can relate to this. I'm gonna look at more of your work now:)

Nice story. I likes this story. I like the way you presenteed each element. I applause you. I likes the way you write. I like the characters in this story.

Nice story. I likes this story. I like the way you presenteed each element. I applause you.

I like this, but I think you should of made it longer, with more detail. This is also a very good story. I liked your story. Write more!

This story is pretty intence, and powerful.