arianaSarroyo

Hello there and welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here. First off, I think you have a nice start here. The title itself lured me in. I ...

Well high there'! :) When I first saw this title on my screen, I definitely had a different picture in mind than the one provided here. Fortunately the picture provided ...

Wow... All I can really say is, this IS fantastic. From the very beginning was a pleasure to read. This is not what I expected and it was gruesome but ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) well first off I would like to say that I felt a bit of confusion at first. I was just wondering what exactly ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) well first off I would like to say that I felt a bit of confusion at first. I was just wondering what exactly ...

Hello there! Z???? This is going to be brief so I apologize in advance. But let us not focus in that. I would like to commend your skill and ability ...

"The Button". Well isn't that an interesting way to present the infamous atomic bomb? I was definitely, most certainly surprised by what I viewed here. It was refreshing though to ...

Well hello! / :D this was LENGTHY, a bit oddly spaced but nevertheless sweet. It definitely wasn't what I expected though. I expected a bit of a story-but I saw ...

Oh hello...it's nice to meet you. I have to agree with the other reader-this was an "organic piece". I think why I was drawn in was the title. At first ...

Hi...well first off it's nice to meet you. I'll be reviewing your piece for today. :) To start off, you have a very colorful vocabulary. And I don't mean that ...

Like the reader above me, I did read the entire thing. But it does sound great (what I read) and look forward to reading more. I first off would like ...

Hi... So I guess I am going to be the only one to review this! But that is A-okay. So to start off, I have to say I did like ...

It this an outline for a book? If so I think I like what you did here. :) Your words were lovely and the entire work flowed. It might have ...

Himelli hello. Well I have to say this is awfully grim and gruesome. Go However, the way it is written is another story. Despite the depressing part it is very ...

Hi there... Well first off I love this. I felt inspired and uplifted to improve my own writing by readingy the message. The message here was clear, which is always ...