ariah347

Hello! Using the YSW sandwich critique technique, so let's get into it. For starters, I have to mention my favorites with this or the "bread/toppings." First, I like how you ...

Hey there! First off, I'll use the YSW critique style of a critique sandwich. I am finding it helpful to write reviews. I have also found when YSW-ers have used ...

Hey there! First off, I'm going to try something new and use the YWS critique sandwich. I have seen a few YSW-ers use this method and the S'more method. I ...

Hellooooo. I love your avatar. It has inspired me to read your novel "Lake Girls" here on YSW. Kudos if that was your intent behind that! Now, why am I ...

Heyooo! First, despite this poem being on YSW for so long, I wonder why there is only one review. I'm shocked to see something sit here for over ten years ...

Heyooo! First off, I read this the other day and was going to leave a review/comment. I genuinely thought I did, but since re-reading, I realize I did not! So, ...

As someone who has been called "nosy" myself, I was immediately drawn into this by the title and first paragraph. Alice was curious or "nosy," and I think the best ...

Hello! First off, hope all is well in your world and I enjoyed reading this! Let's get to my review and then the subsequent questions. Side note, I think it's ...

Hey there! First off, this journey is so personal that it felt like my own! Kudos to drawing me in and evoking the emotion within me while I read. I'm ...

Hey there! I just read another work from you and saw this on the main page. I enjoyed your previous work and wanted to read and review this as well! ...

Imagine how this came to be in the darkness of the night, such an incredible circumstance that adds to the poem's overall message, style, and haunting! After midnight, the world ...

Hey there! This is a pretty profound confession - albeit if it is from personal experience. It may not be, and I may just be assuming, so if I'm wrong, ...

Hey there! First off, this movie is classic. I love it when movies, music, art, etc. inspire writing! It showcases how anything can be an inspiration, and connecting the dots ...

Hey there! First off, "labyrinth" is one of my favorite words! This immediately drew my attention because of that, LOL. I typically review poetry by stanza and will do so ...

Hey there! First off, this was AMAZING. I am a sucker for poems that rhyme and have a nice flow. This fits those perfectly. Your choice of rhymes specifically veered ...