ardentlyThieving

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review!! (totally out of the goodness of my heart and not at all because it's review month or you mentioned reviews for reviews, what're ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review!! Oooooh an acrostic (i totally didn't forget what this type of poem was called for a minute there). You don't really see a ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review!!! Firstly, I had to do a bit of maths. Fifth grade is like 10 or 11 right? Either way damn, this is way ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review!!! Firstly I really liked how you formatted this poem. It's a little unconventional, but I'm a fan of unconventional poetry formats. And I ...

hey hey, Ardently here for a review! Firstly, congratulations on getting two works on the spotlight in one day. I had enough trouble getting one work here, so a heap ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review! I'm a big fan of this poem! It's cute, it's short and it's funny. There's a lot of serious poetry on this site, ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review!! I'm a little intimidated by what Aley wrote, so instead of doing a major critique I'm gonna stick to what I'm good at: ...

Hey hey! Ardently here for a review! First off I really like the chorus! I'm a big fan of repeating lines throughout poetry or I guess songs in this case. ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review! This is....powerful. Like wow, I got actual chills reading this. I'm not great at critiquing poetry, but I'll do my best. Firstly, what ...

Hey hey, Ardently here for a review! "The Queen was far from pleased. Not because she was losing, because she wasn’t." As far as openings go, this is a strong ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! My name is Ardently and I'll be your reviewer for tonight ;) You've chosen not to break your poem into stanzas so I'm going to ...

I was a little intimidated by the length of this piece, but I decided to take the time to read it, and I'm glad I did. It's not the sort ...

Okay, so this is one piece that really impressed me a lot. It's a rather short, simple piece, but in this case that really works. Not everything has to be ...

Hey Sickle, welcome to YWS. I'm not really an expert at reviewing, but I'll do my best. Firstly, I really like the concept of this poem. The idea that love ...

Wow. This is a superb piece of writing. I've always imagined good political commentaries are some of the hardest things to write, and this really is a good political commentary. ...