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For the formating I will say I did try, on several diffrent computers in fact, it just didn't publish the way I intended it to. I hope it will get ...

Looking it over regarding capitalization I realized I hadn't thought much about how I wanted it to be done. Thank you for bringing it to my attention. :)

I did the stanzas like that because the formatting is still not working right for me. Hope it isn't a big issue! :)

Sorry for the weird formating. I hope that the dashes helped with the way you read it. Each dash is a new line.

Sook sorry about the poor formating. I will get right onto fixing that. Thank u for thr reviews so far!

its is meant to be the skin. it's actually the thigh so it doesn't get very tan, thus white, and innocent because not many people see your inner thigh unless ...

Thank you for pointing out the grammatical errors, sometimes it takes a freash set of eyes. I took your advice and added a little bit more of an explanation regarding ...

i had to toy alot with the peace issue in my mind and i just now thought of something but I only want to put it in if it is ...

lol this actually isn't about a guy. I was writing my book and a big part of it was about sunsets and sunset wishes. I took the idea and turned ...

Well thank you, I am honored to be the first thing you have read on here. I hope that you enjoy the site as much as I do.

Thanks

Thank you for such a thurough review. I will however not editing it. The lilies are a symbol of not only death but beauty. The idea wasn't to create a ...

@jordin the countinue things were the way the pages are formated. Just a little bit of screenwriting jargin (or what ever you want to call it) Also thanks for pointing ...

I fixedthe line you were talking about, or at least i hope i did!

Thank you so much I will fix the screams part