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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Absence

    Hi. A well- written poem but the format could use a bit of work. The emotions expressed were great and so was the whole atmosphere created. This to my opinion ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: With all the Angelfish

    As the user before me said, I completely feel unqualified to do a review. This was by far definitely one of the best works on this entire site. A very ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Elementals

    Hello, hope you find my review informative. First, a preview is necessary.Check your spelling and punctuation. Though I like how your characters are described, I think your setting and situation ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Charm of Deception, excerpt

    Hello, it is an interesting story you' ve got here. I personally loved the names- they sounded unique. I loved the girl's guts as normally if a girl was kidnapped ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Technology, General Re: It controls

    Hello, I really liked your poem. The title initially got me hooked and I love to read anything concerning technology. The starting and ending were perfect as well. i really ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Insomnia

    Hello, how are you? It seems to me that you are an expert with this paticular condition. The amount of knowledge you have regarding Insomnia is overwhelming. But why is ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ridding yourself of --

    Hi, hope this review helps you in any way. I really liked this poem but the first thing that came into my mind was- Why is this in poetry? It ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Culture, Narrative Re: Beneath the Wrinkles

    I didnt really get what you were trying to say at first but as I read through I realised that this was certainly a one of a kind short story. ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: Untitled Novel-Prologue and Chapters 1-2

    Hello, time for a quick review. I loved your idea- amnesia is always a facinating topic to write on. I love the way you have described the actions- I found ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: Mating Tears

    Hi, hope my review makes your day. The little brother certainly sounds cute. But, though the story has a lot of confusion. The fact that Zuko threatened the doctor and ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Seer - Chapter 1

    Hi, i am here to give you a quick review. Though, I dont fancy fantasy stories, I must admit that I did like this one. I love the way you ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Why?

    Hi, i hope you enjoy reading your first review for this poem. What hooked me here was your title; a questioning title always works well. This poem had a 'straight ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: Together, The American Way

    Hi, hope you find my review informative. Firstly, I love the subject on which you' ve based your poem upon- its rather a rare one and few people care to ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Pressure

    Hello, hope you enjoy reading my review. A very well- written poem and based on a very realistic theme. I really liked the way you have described pressure and its ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Dementia's Poem

    Hello, hope this review makes your day. A well- written poem and definitely one of my very favourites. I love poems which are well- rhymed and this certainly falls under ...

    Oct 27, 2013


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