anniegirl123

Oh wow, that was sooo funny! I really did not expect the elderly person to be a wrestler... I like how you portrayed the narrator, thinking it would be so ...

That was great, I am so amused I can't top smiling! I absolutely loved this poem, it really just made my afternoon better.... I liked how you pointed out the ...

Hmm, that was pretty interesting. I like how to used the analogy of life being like riding on a train and you described the feeling of nostalgia very well. I ...

It did help me very much, thank you! I really appreciate you telling me what I need to work on because I love to hear constructive criticism even more than ...

I'm glad I could help. :)

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Oh wow, aliens attacking the earth... A bit cliche but I liked the way you wrote it, it made it a bit different from other similar stories. And thinking of ...

Ooooh, this was good, especially the last line. It was a bit short, but I think the length worked well for this poem. I liked how it started with her ...

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for the review! :)

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate the criticism. I usually do have trouble with pacing my stories so I'll try to work on that more.

Awww, that was a really sweet poem. I like the last part especially. :)

Wow, that was pretty creepy but I also thought it was really well written. If you were trying to portay the narrator as being a little crazy, then I think ...