annaseale1998

Oh my god, I am IN LOVE with the third verse. So beautiful! The rhythm, however, could be better in the other verses (apart from the last one, that's perfect ...

Wow! I really liked this! It reminds me of 'Pretty Little Liars', the TV show. The rhythm is great, the rhyming too. The only part I didn't like was "Eaten ...

Haha, I basically agree with all of the other comments. It was seriously funny. But maybe too long? I thought you could have made it just as funny with a ...

It wasn't inspired by a person, just a conversation. I'm glad you like it :D

I put the syrup thing in because my parents always tell me never to drink from the cough syrup, because you'll get really sick. One of my sisters drank a ...

I like it, because how could the narrator know what they look like if they've never seen this person's face? I like the simplicity of it, but it's so short ...

I loved the title, brilliant idea having it backwards. The last two lines were my favourite, it really makes you think! Great work. -Anna

Great work. I really enjoyed reading it, and I loved the ending of the chapter. Keep it up! -Anna

I really enjoyed this! It was fun to read, and the ending was great. You really couldn't have ended it better. I struggled to understand what was going on, and ...

It was a little bit jumpy, and I would have liked it to rhyme a bit more - it wasn't constant. I liked the idea, but you need to work ...

Really imaginative. I would have preferred it to rhyme, because I generally like poems more when they rhyme, but I don't think the emotion and the feelings would have come ...

I liked this, although I thought it went on a bit. The rhyming and rhythm were good. It sounded like you were writing a poem based on a book, but ...

I liked this, it really created a picture in my mind. The rhyming was good, but the only problem was the rhythm. It took me a while to get into ...

Really interesting. Is this part of a story? Or just scattered thoughts? Either way, it definitely grabbed my attention. I loved it, and I actually want you to write more!

Thanks for pointing out the typos, I changed them :)