anna91423

You should, twirling is highly recommended... :P

I loved the lines "Fighting hard against darkness/ For the light the doesn't exist" and "Desperately to hold on to the rope/ Called sanity". I thought it really emphasized your ...

This is so powerful and I love how unforced the rhyme feels. Really beautifully written and painfully sad. Well done. :)

You write in an entrancing, eerie, and beautiful way. This poem is stunning and difficult to forget. I particularly loved the 4th stanza. Well done, I wish I could write ...

I really loved this. It's very inspiring, and I really liked the 7th stanza. Not sure what to suggest about the tenses in the 5th stanza, sorry. Anyway, congratulations on ...

This is amazing. So beautiful... "And the guitar strings become tighter/Around my heart,/But looser around your fingers" I wish I'd thought of that line! I can't compliment this poem enough. ...

Wow.This is so powerful. The lines "murder my baby, or murder my time" is so thought provoking. I liked the switching between perspectives, but I don't think she should have ...

Hey, thanks for the review, thought I'd return the favor: I really enjoyed this, I studied Romeo and Juliet last year and had to do a similar project. I loved ...

Hi, this is really good. Very fast moving and confusing (much like an actual nightmare). The rhymes sounded very natuaral, and I loved the reference to Harry Potter. My only ...

I really like this, is cute and funny, but also had an edge of sadness that girls like this isolate the narrator and make her feel that she needs to ...

Wow, I loved this. I've never seen this format before but I'll definitely try it for my next poem. I also thought the ventriloquist simile was brilliant because it was ...

I love that song, my sister won her first talent show singing that song. Anyways, I love the second stanza because I think it best reflects (no pun intended) what ...

I really liked this. It was just a list of thoughts about the world, very honest, and nicely put together to make a poem that 'smooth' to read. I love ...

Hey Cookie, thanks for the review! I didn't meant to offend anyone with the language in this, I don't usually swear in my poetry and I would never do it ...

This is simply beautiful. The final lines just took my breath away... It just felt so honest. Thats all I have to say. Amazing. :)