anna91423

Hey thanks for the review- I'll definitely revisethis with your advice in mind later. Just to quickly clear up what I meant by "fags"- where I'm from this is a ...

Thank you so much for that review! I'll probably redraft tomorrow and make sure to implement all your suggestions and critique's! I'll try and correct grammar and spelling myself, but ...

Hi, thanks a lot for the review, I'm glad you liked! After I'm done replying I'll try and edit the poem a little and take on your constructive criticisms, you're ...

Thanks for the review! It's for a school thing so I'll make sure I take all your constructive criticism on board when I redraft! I see some major editing in ...

Thanks for the review! Let me know if you ever need a review :)

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. For me the ending was about my realisation that I can't convince myself there's a God out there, and that means ...

Thanks for the review! When i do a re draft I'll definitely try and make some of the improvements you suggested. Let me know if you ever need a review ...

Thank you for the review! I think I'll probably do a re-write fully in rhyme at some point. Maybe have the bit where she hears the animals in rhyming couplets ...

Oooops, 8 ) made the sunglassess face.... 8)

Review Time! Okay, first off I really enjoyed this, the modern take on a well known story/characters is always interesting. However, there were a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. ...

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Thank you! :)

I actually take that back- I got inspired and have now both written and posted the next chapter! Needed a break from History revision... :P

No I haven't! Who is this friend? Maybe she copied off me because I have never stolen anybodies work. Ever. What is the name of her song? I want to ...

You should, twirling is highly recommended... :P