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  • wow. i'm honestly speechless! i've read this more than 2 times and i can't lie, it is really good. its emotional and sits heavy on the readers' hearts, while having ...

    Dec 14, 2022

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural
    Re: Guardian Time

    hi! thank you for sharing this writing! i like the subject and prompt you have going with this, its interesting. you have a skill with describing things! i felt like ...

    Dec 13, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: This Is My Mood (Colors)

    intelligent writing! i always say that i wish i was a colorful person and colorful writer. i claim to be blue, with my writing a reflection of that. i like ...

    Dec 13, 2022

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Hugo, Little Steps

    this is tooo cute!! i feel like this is something diverse, lots of different ages of readers can like this piece. i love when writers can capture genuine adoration for ...

    Dec 9, 2022

  • Short Story » Lyrical, General
    Re: The Day I Chose Daddy

    this is such a sweet piece! i'm a daddy's girl and as well so this hit home. the bond between a dad and their daughter is wholesome and almost poetic ...

    Dec 9, 2022

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: brother, when?

    thank you for sharing this, its such an intimate moment. i listened to the soundcloud version and aghhh, it hit hard. your voice has such a calming, warm tone. it ...

    Dec 9, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: True Angel #4: Corp. Cleo Carson's Journal, Entry 1

    i know this is an older one, but it caught my eye! im now reading all the other ones. i like how this is a journal entry, it reminds me ...

    Dec 8, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Sweet Nothing - Chapter 2

    like @harryhardy said, this was a great continuation! to be honest, i wasn't expecting Paxton to be a people-person, so that threw me around! i guess i had stereotyped him ...

    Dec 8, 2022

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    Re: Eternity and a Day

    I always appreciate a longer writing like this, so thank you! First things first, you use such descriptive language! "gleaming"..."jutting"..."bleary." great choices! the story line is intriguing and

    Dec 8, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » General, Romantic
    Re: Sweet Nothing - Chapter 1

    oooo this one is interesting!! first off.. i LOVE the reference to 505 lol, i assume arctic monkeys? when i first started reading this, my first thought was actually 2013 ...

    Dec 8, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Words

    well done on this one! my favorite line has to be "A sea of dark, a sea of light. A sea of flight, a sea of fight." the topic is ...

    Dec 8, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: maybe i won't hide forever

    i love this. i wish i had fancy things to say like the others, but gawd damn. i love the words u used and how u placed them, it seems ...

    Dec 7, 2022

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General
    Re: I Am Very Enthusiastic

    wow. this hit hard. emotional pieces like this tend to pull on my heart strings. u really captured the essence of human nature and how the circle of life is ...

    Dec 7, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Loneliness

    hi! i heavily relate to this writing. u did very well!! loneliness off the bat for me is a very confusing emotion. i so deeply crave intimacy and closeness within ...

    Dec 7, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Home

    howdy! this is well written, i love the subject. its obvious and blatant, yet gives the reader room to wonder and think on their own or maybe relate. it gives ...

    Dec 7, 2022

Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci